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big GZ 08-12-04 08:04 PM

big GZ vs Wite Warrior
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-12-04 at 08:34 PM

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System 08-12-04 08:05 PM

big GZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 08:05 PM.

System 08-12-04 08:06 PM

Wite Warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 08:06 PM.

Wite Warrior 08-12-04 08:11 PM

Big GZ dis is gonna eazee/gonna pull out a piece bitch-c?/Coz yo mummy really needz me/

Wite Warrior gunna rap u up like a tortilla/Mortal Kombat-im gonna kill-Ya

Put holez in u wid a uzi/Holez in yo brain u feel woozy/
Bring out da big gunz/Pierce yo muthafukin lungz/Go round pimpin hoez, nunz and mumz/
So 1 last word / shootin u down like a bird

Wite Warrior 08-12-04 08:13 PM

uppin fo votez will return tha favor

Wite Warrior 08-12-04 08:14 PM

bit slow r'nt u

big GZ 08-12-04 08:27 PM

oh god...you're a wite warrior who just ran outta luck
yous a virgin pussy...consider this ya first time being fucked//
don't work 4 Domino's but i still deliver hot shit
pouring milk on rice crispies...be the only time u pop shit//
what do the N.W.A., Winter and mixed drinks have in common?
be the only time u see "ICE" or in lamens terms diamonds//
when i drop this verse ya whole career should be finished
ya record drops to 0-2 and ya reputation is diminished//
hip-hop accepts everybody but you have a unique case
how u gonna be a warrior and you carry a suitcase//
i heard that Wite Warrior is similar 2 DSL
cuz he D.a S.orry L.oser who couldn't be hott in hell//
i think thats enough...his corner should throw in the towel
cuz my rhymes is over the fence and his just be foul//

big GZ 08-12-04 08:44 PM

I'm a bit slow becuz i never thought u were so eager to lose

MC Wrapper 08-13-04 01:55 PM

Voted For: big GZ

My vote goes to big GZ!!! hey i tihnk bigs flow and everyhting was ebtter than wites...My vote goes to BIG!!

EmerginMc07 08-13-04 02:28 PM

Voted For: big GZ

yo dis goes to ig Gz easily i ean Wite Warrior u had yo shit but i have seen way betta from u dawg , Gz gad flo and strcutre was perfect and his punches hit hard as fck, ne way good battle yall ,

v/GZ

return da favor heres da link so u aint gota go thru all that jus clicck ,
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...493259&posted=1

Kayem 08-13-04 03:01 PM

Voted For: big GZ

hahahaha do i really have to explain my vote on this one....

big GZ......SRUCTURE was good......Flow was o.k.......punches were good.......matas and wordplay were nice.........personals were o.k

Wite warrior......structure was wack......flow was poor......punches were weak......personals (what personal)...

vote: big GZ

TURBAN 08-16-04 05:04 PM

Voted For: big GZ

haha ez one sided wite warrior your closer was a joke , i'm not even a rapper and i knew that wow , big cz alright work nothing special , nice on the nwa line ,

wite "so 1 last word/ shootin you down like a bird" <-wack

no hate all love though

jus work on it

peace

Mc Nem-E-sis 08-16-04 05:28 PM

This was feedback posted for Wite Warrior
 
lol

Abraxas 08-16-04 05:31 PM

Voted For: big GZ

wack battle but wite warroir elevated a lil
hands down giving this to Big GZ for a better structured verse and has more punches and personals it was really ok Wite warrior your improving but try to struxcture your lines and make strong punches
props vote to BIG


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