MC Wrapper vs Wite Warrior
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-15-04 at 08:32 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MC Wrapper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 08:33 PM.

Ok check this...

Btich, you will eat the defeat, cuz i wont drop you on your feet,
I will slotter you like meat, You wont beat me, not even if you cheat,
My lyrics will block your rhymes like a lampshade,
Bitch spit some real rhymes, I aint Playing Charades,
I still run the streets yet i'm still walkin',
You always be stalkin' listen to my rhymes,an hour later your still gawkin'
I am like a pidgeon, I will shit on your head,
you dont realize what i do to your hoe in bed,
Dawg, you should remember, When you battle me, you should surrender,
My rhymes are as tough as bricks , yours are vary tender ,
They come to me and ricochet off of me,
Bitch you aint in the game, you just trixxy!!

Wite Warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 05:17 AM.

Man ur rhymez aint dope/Coz my linez 2 hott 4 u 2 cope/
Stopped prayin 2 win now u hope- Gonna need a lifeline or a muthafuckin rope/Cuz my rhymez iz gunna chokeu, Wash u out like soap/Bitch man over board on this muthafuckin boat/Ur lines is a insult just anutha weapon 4 me 2 tote/
Get ur homie and ur boy and fuckin e-lope/
Coz bitch u just lost all ur votez

Uppin for votes ya'll!!! ................................

Voted For: Wite Warrior

yo man Mc Wrappa wat was u talkin out wit da igeon thing dat was crazy, um good battle to both of u but from punhcs to vocab i think wite warrior takes this but not by far,


v/Wite Warrior

return da favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...493259&posted=1

Voted For: MC Wrapper

MC Wrapper takes this one. He had some good creativity in his rhymes. Like the charades one and the surrender one too. Wites verse was alright but it was kinda ordinary stickin on one rhyme the whole verse (ope,ote). Wrapper takes this with harder punches, and a more creative verse. Not really any personals in both, but Wrapper gets tha win.

Vote-MC wrapper

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Thanx G ....will return tha fava

Voted For: Wite Warrior

this was defently a wek ass battle but if im gonna choose some one who defeated who it was defently mc wrapper defently came harder....1

hey young tips... did you mean to vote for me?....cuz you sedi cameharder...but you voted for Wite....

Voted For: MC Wrapper

warrior: yo, u really gotta work on ur structure, vocab, and rhyme scheme.... but ur punches were softer then a babies ass literaly, before battlin try workin on dat iight?

mc rapper: iight, ur shyt was iight but not good, u also gotta work on ur structure, ur punches are iight but still gotta work on dat also... urs was hard to followc cuz it was all strecthed... well to make u have a better chance of winning in other battles try thinking of a opener and closer!!!

vote: MC

This was feedback posted for Wite Warrior
 

I wasn'ty really feeling this one Wite. W. I thought some of the multies where played and you tried to cram too many ryhmes in the verse.You're opener was your best, but none of the others stood out,.

MC Wrapper yours was a lot betetr and was a much more decent attempt at rap. Some of the multies were well executed and most (if not all) of the punches hit in a variety of hardneass levels.

V/ MC Wrapper.

peace.

Uppin' for Votes!

This was feedback posted for MC Wrapper
 

MC WRAPPER IS A FUCK BITER! I CANT BELIEVE THIS SHIT. AND WAS CRAZIER IS THAT NO BODY NOTICED


THIS IS WHAT HE WROTE:


As I lay down laws like I lay carpet,
Stop it if you think your gonna make a profit,
Dont see my ones, don’t see my guns get it,
Now tell ya friends Poppa hit it then split it,
In two as I flow with the Junior Mafia,<<4 BIGS SAKE HE SAID JUNIOR MAFIA>>
I don’t know what the hell’s stoppin’ ya,
I’m clockin’ ya - Versace shadeswatchin’ ya,
And my jam knock in the Mitsubishi,
Girls pee pee when they see me,
Nava-hoes creep me in they tee pee,
Once ya grin, I’m in game, begin,
From the second I started to sin,
I knew I was gona win!!!

THE NAME OF THA SONG THAT HE HACKED UP WAS "ONE MORE CHANCE" BY THA NOTORIOUS B.I.G. FEATURING "TOTAL" I THINK.
HE CUT UP THA SONG AND DISGRACED HIM SELF .
U FUCKIN BITCH FAKE ASS RAPPER