Verbal Abuse vs J DOT
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

this is the real one

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-13-04 at 01:03 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 12:34 AM.

Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 12:37 AM.

J dot...

Erm, Its True Youve Beaten Me.
Well... Ive Elevated, And Im Back.

Good Luck.

Guuh Erm...

Sprinkling Hate n Herbs to Steak My Terms. It Would Bite To Have A Tie.
Its Bad To Lie. If You Ever Text A Veteran Verse, Be Sure To Prep Your Alliby.
I Scowered Roster To Roster, For JDOT's Tollerable Lyrics. Theres Few In The Mood.
No Wonder His Sig Dont Rep His Family Fued, These Members Have Crews In Their Crew.
This Much Is True, Your Just In The Rookie Division Of A Rookie Crew.
Cmon...Look At ch'You, You Cant Stand Up To Handle Business...The Pussy's You.
Check Their Forum For Bordem, Its Time To Put Ends To This Fam.
IDK How Their Shit Hits Fans? Your Beef Aint Even Beef...Its Spam.
Strippen n Tear, My Fingers Flippen n Scare. Voters Bring Sail To The Rips.
Gees, Getta Grip. Aint Got Time For Crew Battles...
Plant Fear n Hearts While Its Mere Depart. Ill Just Jot Down Rings.
JDot's Thoughts In A Blur...Just Block Out Things, n Fold Your Hand Before I Drop An Ace, And Have To Knock Out Kingz.


Ma Ma Ma....Merked.

I 'abuse'd this cat once, thought he got the message
He underrated me, when he gunna stop the guessing
Imma Take you out like old garbage, wrap the bag around yo head
Then take you to yo home and place you in yo bed
You'll die in yo sleep, cause of the words out of your mouth
'Verball'ly 'Abuse' pricks like you ass i council(cancel) em out
When you learn, you dont want it dawg, I'll chalk you up
Ill erase you, pat em together, have you coughing up dust
you aint respected, you own crew making me sigs
you still wouldnt 'Roc-A-Fella' if you was a Dipsett Kid
so stop yo act, you'll never be hard with yo fist
I sonned you twice, tell yo crew to put me on they Respect List

why everytime i get a link from yo group, then when i go back to it, the threads deleted...?!?...thats twice already

uppn this shit.......... lets get some votes...and vote on the bottom, weeks shameful rapper battle...thanx

upppn this shit peoplessssssssssssss

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

didn't care for verbal's structure but the personal's were hittin:

I Scowered Roster To Roster, For JDOT's Tollerable Lyrics. Theres Few In The Mood.
No Wonder His Sig Dont Rep His Family Fued, These Members Have Crews In Their Crew.

Check Their Forum For Bordem, Its Time To Put Ends To This Fam.
IDK How Their Shit Hits Fans? Your Beef Aint Even Beef...Its Spam.

don't get me wrong.. j dot's rhyme was cool but it didn't seem personal enough that's why i'm giving it to VA... both need to add more wordplay and multi's, metas... good shyt... VA barely got this

Voted For: J DOT

J Dot had some good personals, I like the line about his crew makin' you sigs. Verbal Abuse, you had some ok punches, but none really stood out to me. You should work on structure too, but no hate. Good battle to the both of you.
Vote - J Dot

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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

verbal abuse:your verse was strong here, you had nice punches and multies, i liked the choice of creative and imaginitive words in this verse, i mean that it is different from what i'm used to seeing in frontlines, i can tell you know what your doing, i liked you opening lines and the personals against your opponent, i thought the spam line and your closer were best.....nice job
j dot: your verse had nice flow and structure, i just dont think it was as strong as verbal's verse, although i did like your last 3 lines, they were the strongest
Vote:verbal abuse due to wordplay,punches and strong vocab