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string9487 vs BiG-WhIt3y
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6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-13-04 at 02:11 AM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 01:42 AM.
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BiG-WhIt3y has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 01:43 AM.
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All you are to me is a string on a TAMPON,
You want a win you messin with the wrong wun SON, Cause even beatin you wit my weakest shit aint fun... My ryhmes hit harder then bullets outa my nine, And back off cause you know im gunna get mine, Fuck now i got beef wit you like fifty got wit Shyne... |
eh yo i'll put holes in ya clothes, they tear in ya fabric
dis lil bitch get "shot up" like a Heroin Addict u cant "kick it" wit me, remove ya sneaks only thing big about u, is ya losing streak he the type that be wearin feminine wigs u wack, why dont u "lose yaself" like tha boy eminem did HAAAAAA |
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin for votes votes votes
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Voted For: String9487
B-dubbs got murked...lol... string was already winning but his closer killed it...lmao... lose yaelf like emeinem did... that's good shyt...lmao Yo b... work on ya structure and punches... i know... there are a lot of weak dudes on this site... battle them first and then step up to bigger challenges, aiight... no hate... just facts... you're not ready yet, but if you keep at it, by golly you'll get there!...lmao |
thanks fo the feed back but i dotn really care bout my record thats why i battle good people lol
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Voted For: String9487
Aahaha...Yo Big got merked in this battle. Damn, String killed you Big. Your shit was wack. Opener was weak cuz tampon and son dont rhyme. And it just went even further downhill after that. String came with a much harder verse with punchlines comin all the way to the finish. Big whitey got killd man. Anybody who votes fa Bigs verse is weak. String also had tha better structure and flow. String gets tha vote. Vote-String Vote on this: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141940 |
Voted For: String9487
yooo one sided as fuck aman strign took ds hands down, he had good metas and his flo jus hit , white yo dawg u need to work on evrythin specially vocab n ull get it, v/string no hate string return da favor dawg http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142129 |
Voted For: String9487
alright lemme start off by sayin that big whitey needs to work on his rhyme scheme really bad. ok battle and i think string won by a mile. harder punches, better wordplay, you took like all the categories and ur vocab was in between ok and good. whitey you also need to elevate on your punches. no hate. hit up the battles in the sig and return the fav. -1- |
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Voted For: String9487
ok: string:your verse was good, nice flow, punches, and structure,i liked your opening lines,eminem lines are played but you said something i haven't heard which was good,overall good verse throughout, i also liked the sneaks line too, good job...... big-whitey:i liked your verse too, nice opening lines also, flow and structure were good too, i just think string took this cause of wordplay vote:string |
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