"You Dont Fit" ???Post Feedback???
 

heres another song i made tonight to the beat "I made you look" by nas check it out:


My rap is realy just like me hittin it down with flava/1
Stop runnin away from me I know your brava/.2
I tell you to Just wait up ill be back with more/3
Don’t go get yer mom to hussle me cuz shes a crack whore/.4
Im not the one who would yell shit out cuz im all about/5
Taken my self to the top to be numba one and never stop/.6
Cuz realy I can do it when I rap to the hip-hop/7
Ya ive ran into a few cops but I told them to leave and never said props/.8
Now ill be hittin it up wit my flavor and you betta be Brava/9
Cuz my fast spitten rhymes make you freeze like a screen savor/.10
So stay away from me im danga/11
So don’t I could of scared you up you faggot stranga/.12
Cuz you was the one born in the manga/13
So don’t run from me or I will call you the yella ranga/.14
Bo I will be say to you ya asked me who/15
I told you stop dressin like yer in that crazy crew/.16
So ill break it down with my fast rhyme/17
Stop thinking yer all that and do the crhyme/.18
So I could sut you up cuz I go so fast you would be a mime/19
So stop thinking you’re the shit and take a look around you a bit/.20
And then you will relize you don’t fit/.21

some nice shit man, i liked it, keep it up
gimme some feed on ma rhymes
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141747

thanks man ya ill check it out

^^^ U P P I N ^^^

U P P I N this shit come on

This Was Good,i Liked It

thanks man ya ill prob join yer crew and ditch my old one cuz empires a bitch

koo

U P P I N this shiot ight check this out im straight callin you to check this shit out right now.