Paramik vs Boomer
 

Battle Rules:

2 lines punchline
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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Check in by: 08-13-04 at 03:25 PM

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Boomer has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 02:56 PM.

Parimik i bet u aint seen no titz,Dis will giv u nitemares u b havin a fit,Do urself sum gud and get a chik,stop luvin up dik

Paramik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 03:20 PM.

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Cut the shit, or I’ll chop you like if you were potatoes, thin & baked.
Boomer couldn’t stop spitting shitty rhymes even if he hit the car brake.

sorry for not posting earlier i was bunched up with alot of PM of peep wanting to battle me then my comp froze

sorry please vote now

uppin fo votez ^^^^^^&^^^^^

Voted For: Paramik

ok paramik get this...his hit harder
was more enjoyable wasnt great but good

boomer...yours didnt hit hard at all and your struc was
messed up just keep elevating.i mean what kinda crap
is you aint seen no tits.....and you miss-spelled nightmares
and some and good and chick and dick...

v/paramik

Voted For: Paramik

Cut the shit, or I’ll chop you like if you were potatoes, thin & baked.
Boomer couldn’t stop spitting shitty rhymes even if he hit the car brake
^^^^gud flow.nice metas...decent punchline

Parimik i bet u aint seen no titz,Dis will giv u nitemares u b havin a fit,Do urself sum gud and get a chik,stop luvin up dik

^^^didnt rhyme....talkin bout tits n shit=herbish

ok.myt vote goes to paramik.he takes this very easy..
boomer urs didnt rhyme,no metas,no flow,no nothin...
talkin bout tits n gays is very weak coz it aint personal////
paramik i liked the car brake that woz a nice punch....n a gud meta in da first line

vote???im not sure.......lol

Voted For: Paramik

Paramik wins this shit easy. Boomer had a weak bar that was kind of a played out punch. Structure was fucked up too. Dont try to do multis the whole verse. Change the rhyme so the reader doesnt get bored. Paramik takes this with a much better punchline.

Vote-Paramik

Voted For: Paramik

Paramik has my vote, but I didn't really understand the part about the car brake. But I liked your wordplay in the first line. Boomer, you gotta work on your punches, your multis were aight but that's all you had. No hate though.

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Voted For: Paramik

boomer that was not a punch that wasnt even a push no vocab and no good diss par that was bad too but it was at least a smack and good flow you get this