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Magic Diss
How did somebody turn so bad his name was MAGIC now he's worse than he was now isn't dat TRAGIC your a crack addict i'll easerly beat you down living stop rapping im comin to burn your house on thanks givin you think you got talent I swear down man you haven't! all you are is shit and you won't change from straight bein bent You don't know me so try and give me a nice new apologey this bitch is so dumb he doesn't no what are apostophies he's got fuckin alogies on his face dat look like boils you must think your it claming your RB mutha fuckin royal your just getting plain old I don't have time for you 2 talk just turn your back and do the walk your just to damn awkward teach you a lesson before I pull my gun dats a smith and wesson say your prayers and blessins when I blow your head off for messin No beef I just want elevation let me in dis crew for investergation yea don't ever judge me magic... no beef just proving a fact here dat i an't wack just |
nice shit yo your structure was ill
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yea 4 sho,
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i liked the structure , work on your spelling a bit but otherwise raw
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142207 check mine out :shoot: |
.:Suck My Dick:.
Pussie hatter wants in CS,,,. but you don’t match our criteria The only time you drop heats when you got verbal diarrhoea Face it I tried to help you,,. but your feeble mind was inferior Couldn’t handle the complexity, because my rhymes superior Put it this way, I got the relevant info to get this mofo banned Thinks he’s an MC,,,.. But He’s Never Had a MIC in his hand See you haven’t Got Shit On Me,,. Papa Doc,,. Find Mind,,. Sinner You wouldnt be dope if all the vets was removed with paint finnier Tell your Sister to check me when she’s in London Next We are gonna hook up, show her the sights then have a sex |
PLEASE LEAVE A LINK TO WERE YOU REPLIED TO SOMEONE ELSES OPEN MIC HERE GOT DAMN READ RULES.. OR I'LL CLOSE THIS.
and it' a good work i dont want to have to . |
that was good mayun nice structure also dayum lol yall dissin eachother like hell,ya verse was raw yo
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yah kid this was tight nice diss but let me drop this piece up in here
Prevail with code bazaar like railroad car down tracks To smack clowns whack in the head with renown facts This affair flames like an airplane so get your flights right And wing your bling read this thing and sleep tight tonight My scripts hardcore like ships on shore flip more than acrobats do With facts and stats true, my crew got gatts, wear gangsta hats too |
nice shit man keep that up work on punches a little and yer dope
flow 7/10 vocab 8/10 punches 6/10 overal 7/10 good drop keep posting check my open mic disses |
some nice fuckin shit, im still up wit a q tha how do you get that thing to say some custon shit not flyweight and shit like that
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