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OGfromPawtucket vs Wrecker
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-13-04 at 10:53 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Wrecker has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 10:24 PM.
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OGfromPawtucket has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 10:27 PM.
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Slappin Fools, And Its Tru I'll Wreck Your Crew, So Don't Think I Won't,
Dis Nerds Not Gettn Picked, Coz If We Switched Verses Da's Da Only Way Ya Scorin Points.. So Quit The Front, Coz Everybody Knows This Bastids Lame, And Wrecker Will Wipe Ya Out Kid, Like A Category 5 Hurricane.. So When You Loose This, I Should Be The One To Blame For This, And this Fag Knows That The Only Time He Spits Is To Beat On Dicks.. Playin Bastids, And This Kid Is Now Officially Left To Crumble.. N Og Will Hit The Mat, Like A California Style Of Ready To Rumble.. |
I dongotta know what you write to winthis fight, all i gotta know is i got the lyrical sight,ur a lil kid thats afraid to get hit..thats probobly why wen u spit you spit shyt. ill show you the way to be a little less gay...but u betta keep your mouthshut dont spraywhat you say...now you cansit bak relax take a load off as i split you with my axe.just know that facts...ur a pussy without pussy nd you like cocks inyour mouth...if i ever meet your fagget asss youll be booted north to south..i bring it straight from pentuket as i put your body in a bucket..wen im through with you the last words ull says fukit.so dont even try you cango home and cry...while i fuk ur mom so hard she flies.to the sky...its not even worth it..ill give you paperand a pen..as a matter of factmake that 4 and ten...cuz four plus tenhas to equall fourteen...nd 14 feet under the grounds the last place youll be seen.
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This was feedback posted for Wrecker
Alright, I'm choosing not to vote on this for personal reasons, but I gotta say this battle wasn't that great. Wrecker, I know you're a new guy, so just practice and you'll get better. Oh, and by the way, expect to see a vote form jacktheripper24 on this battle. Then you can report a crew vote, since he's OG's best friend or something like that...
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I'm New...yea in this site, kid if you're trying to insinuate that i'm not too good, well this verse took me 5 minutes..i'll rip you to pieces any given day..
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Whoa whoa calm down there buddy...I don't care how long it took you to write the verse, but if that's what you're gonna bring to a battle, I'm gonna give you some constructive criticism. But if you had a good record on another site before you came here...then I'ma tell you you'renot good. All I said was practice and you'll get better, most people on this site don't do too great early on, I mean, look at who you're battling...I ain't mean to hate on you Wreck, keep doin' ya thing.
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ight lets get some votes...
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bump
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uppin' drop links for your battles, and if you vote, i'll return the favor..
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Voted For: Wrecker
wrecker took it... punches-wreck flwo- wreck creativity-wreck... you gotta rhyme and have punches to make a verse work... wrecker nice... but both of u can elevate some... return the vote to a battle in my sig... |
Voted For: Wrecker
ok bagttle and wrecker gets this hand down man wreck wins thisd battle for a overall better verse and line he had better structure and verse and had good punches and personals OG: improve and dont put your structure like that vote / wrecker |
please voet here
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142877 |
ok, i already voted..uppin' for more votes w/links if you want to..
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