AutoMATIK™ vs OGfromPawtucket
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 10:35 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 11:06 PM.

OGfromPawtucket has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 09:51 AM.

Chargin'-with-cavalry, Freeze-your-veins like Freezing Rain-In-Calgary-Sleets.
I'll compact-your-feces until your intestine tracts-deplete by half and Slain-Bowels-Retreat.
But I`d rather contract-your-teeth, relapse-your-speech, and bash-your-breed.
'Cause I'll spray your brain matter in all directions, like the complete Absence-of-Gravity.
Flatten you out until you're see-through, like displaying Stormed-Pages-of-Vectors.
Eating you alive, Sh!tting out bones and teeth, like re-incarnations of Hannibal Lector.
A Born-Nation-Of-Wrecked-Turds, I`ll Storm-Straight-Through-Your-Record.
I'll grab your women, but not as AutO, Just Let My Porn-Alias-Wreck-Her.
Tie knives to my peck-er, Slit Sectors of Flesh-Wounded-At-The-Epidermis.
Ruined-and-construed to unhuman norms, Got your Head-Screwed-In, but the Neck-Keeps-Turnin.

i cant wait destroy you, with these rhymes ima annoy you
you won't be able to figure em out cuz rap aint for you
there aint no crew that better than mine foo'
cuz we the E.S.S., and we are the very few
and cuz of that you try to mock me but you just cant clock me
yo punches are weak just like yo cock, b
it wont even stand up see? only thing you can do is pee
can't put it in a girls pussy you just wish you could and suck "deeck"
So just stop yo rhymin stop it right now
don't even hit post, rhymin? i might show ya how

No Hate.

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

URRMMM AUTOMATIK RIPPED THIS SHIT

Do i need to explain? Well Kid Will prolly try n get this DQed so

Auto you had sick multis.. lil stretched but your flow helped that.. Tight opener.. Tight closer.. punches were good.. flow was good.. all that shyt was Dope..

OG.. you need to elevate a little.. you werent spittin the level you needed to.. your rymes were pretty basic.. punches werent as hard as Autos.. And you forced a lotta rhymes..

Anyways Vote Goes To AUTO.

Return the Fav...

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142953

This was feedback posted for AutoMATIK™
 

I'm not voting on this battle for personal reasons...
Auto, good job man you would've won this had I voted. You had great multis and wordplay, right out the gate I was feeling your verse. Your first line explained to me why you're now 13-3. No dickridin', but damn that was a hot verse. OG, time to battle buddy, no more duckin'...

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

og no vocab wordplay punches or disses you need to elevate badly not to hate but that was whackd for real 1/10
auto good vocab your strcture sucks its way to streshed and i cant catch your flow at all neither of you had good personals work on that auto and fix your strture 3/10

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

that was crazy man great flow man great punchlines
uppin 4 votes
CODEE vs. The Kid P-Dizzle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142734

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

automatik wins this...he kapt going with his punches an personals..while tha other guy said only a lil

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

v/Atuo....nice mutlies......ok punches........ok sturcture/flow

O-G verse no punches....n wordplay or nothin...elevate