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Empire vs Rising Sun
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting you MUST check in and have 40 minutes maximum to drop your KEYSTYLE verse. Good Luck and may the best person win. We will do a blind spit...pz Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-14-04 at 12:13 AM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
Rising Sun has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 11:17 PM.
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Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 11:17 PM.
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This lyrical exercise i consider you PRACTICE
You the DEFINITION image of TEXTUAL WHACKNESS Ya plagarazation of real artists will not help you Like ice in a ''RISING SUN'' my bars will melt you If you survive the gun my knife will finish you My verbal warfare leave few survivors ya chances is minamul Its a disaster this bastards roasted never stood a chance You could'nt win if i let you post 4 VOTES IN ADVANCE Castes,staples and stiches when they bandage ya I aint never seen a hot rapper from Canada(his country) 32 battles still in frontlines as a AMATEUR I granted ya a small dose of basic reality I need a easy win i couldnt wait till you challenged me 16 LOSSES you spit more trash then OSCAR THE GROUCH See how my punchlines easily knocking you out Rhyming im full karat diamonds you only a CRYSTAL Now ''RISE''my''SUN'' and watch daddy ECLIPSE YOU |
When you see my verse its evident a genius-wrote-this//
I’m known for stealing Hondas so you’ll have a difficult time keeping-your-focus// “Notice” that I “drop-spits”// Scarier than the thought of “chop-sticks” through your “optics”// Empire must be a terrorist, the way he loves to find the “cock-pits”// Make you freeze like it’s the “arc-tic” and I “whip-clits” with “quick-wits”// You must have your asshole plugged cause you “spit-shit”// Watch me “rip-this” Empire and I’ll overcome it like Ghandi// You from New York, it’s funny how you over hyped more than Jason Giambi// But my wins stack more digits than his “salary” every time you “battle-me”// Your presence has no point like the blind in art “galleries”// From games to the files-you-hacked, your style-is-whack The only time you’d ever spit raw is if you chewed sushi while-you-rapped// And just like the Brits, we all know empires fall… |
When you see my verse its evident a genius-wrote-this//
I’m known for stealing Hondas so you’ll have a difficult time keeping-your-focus// “Notice” that I “drop-spits”// Scarier than the thought of “chop-sticks” through your “optics”// Empire must be a terrorist, the way he loves to find the “cock-pits”// Make you freeze like it’s the “arc-tic” and I “whip-clits” with “quick-wits”// You must have your asshole plugged cause you “spit-shit”// Watch me “rip-this” Empire and I’ll overcome it like Ghandi// You from New York, it’s funny how you over hyped more than Jason Giambi// But my wins stack more digits than his “salary” every time you “battle-me”// Your presence has no point like the blind in art “galleries”// From games to the files-you-hacked, your style-is-whack The only time you’d ever spit raw is if you chewed sushi while-you-rapped// And just like the Brits, we all know empires fall… . |
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Voted For: Rising Sun
YO... Rising sun takes the cake on this one.. not by much but empires verse was aight but he rhymed you twice which is herbish and risin you defenetly need to work on da structure... and by the way... ford makes focuse |
Voted For: Empire
both verses were good and i read and understanded all parts My bvote goes to Empire for a better verse with decent punches and good personals i likd his structure too Vote is empire props this was a close battle |
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Voted For: Empire
you had much better punches and your structure was semi solid , other dude jus wasnt feeling it no hate though check out this battle the kid is a biter lets get it closed http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142418 |
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