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M&rk 08-14-04 02:58 PM

pictureperfect2 vs MONSOON
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-15-04 at 02:58 PM

Must drop verse in 1444 minutes after check in.

System 08-14-04 02:58 PM

pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 02:58 PM.

System 08-14-04 03:05 PM

MONSOON has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 03:05 PM.

MONSOON 08-14-04 03:40 PM

aight....check it

Ill roll you into a duby and then smoke you,
fake ass hustla this aint soap, this is coke fool !
your name sounds like a soap opera, why PICTA PERFECT 2,
if its like that, mother teresa , must be PICTA PERFECT TOO
this cat wears dresses like the modalissa picture,
like it when its windy, so he could show what he got behind his zipper,
prewritten, think hes a metaphorbical genius, your raps deformed
like your breasts matching your penus,,,,
fuk me, nah fuk youu, this shits unlimited
you the first one to watch and point when a football teams scrimagin
this cats the sequal of picture perfect, cause he saw my dik on the net
take a picture of monssoon, then take a picture of shrek....

MONSOON 08-14-04 04:00 PM

cant even drop in 30 min mann.............................................. .............................

M&rk 08-14-04 04:32 PM

Barely 100 posts, but still not even good as a flyweight groupie
Cuz by the looks of ya 0-4 record u still worse than a newbie

U got all it takes, monsoon is in the making of a hoe
Now all u need is a turntable avatar and zero battles in audio

Closes this faggot “cums to shit” is havin that well known poop dick
U a unskilled bitch, could squat over a fire and not “drop hot shit”

Only time u go along with what u are is when b/c u pussy” u figured u’d stink
Ya bitch pussy u just like “ja rule”, and u still can't “murda ink”

This cats unfitting like 32 waist jeans wit a 400 pounder in a fitting room
That’s what happen when u flow like a drought havin the name monsoon

If his record alone isn’t enough to tell u he pathetic
Check the lil bar in his sig, cuz u must not of read it


Bar in his sig……
AT ANY TIME SOMETHING BAD COULD HAPPEN
I CREATE THAT,
ITS LIKE THROWIN GUNPOWDER IN A PITBULLS FOOD
AND WATCHIN IT REACT !!!

M&rk 08-15-04 03:21 PM

uppin

Ill-Grammatix 08-16-04 08:44 PM

Voted For: pictureperfect2

uhh....

monsoon lost me at everything below:\/\/\/

fake ass hustla this aint soap, this is coke fool !
your name sounds like a soap opera, why PICTA PERFECT 2,
if its like that, mother teresa , must be PICTA PERFECT TOO
this cat wears dresses like the modalissa picture,
like it when its windy, so he could show what he got behind his zipper,
prewritten, think hes a metaphorbical genius, your raps deformed
like your breasts matching your penus,,,,
fuk me, nah fuk youu, this shits unlimited
you the first one to watch and point when a football teams scrimagin
this cats the sequal of picture perfect, cause he saw my dik on the net
take a picture of monssoon, then take a picture of shrek....

this was a terrible verse, dawg... not hate ... just truth
all that PICTA PERFECT stuff and the penis references... not good subject matter for a battle... where's ya personals and punches? wordplay? meta's or multi's? opener and closer sucked ass... elevate on all levels, man... again... no hate ... just brutal honesty (I'm like Simon in this shyt!...lol)

Pic had an all around better verse with better structure... better rhymes...not great but enough to beat mon... bars 4&5 kinda sucked but the rest was ok... basic... to the point... nothing explosive that made me wanna pulla Black Rob or nuttin' like that but it got the job done

50Cal. 08-16-04 09:49 PM

Voted For: pictureperfect2

ok picture weak punches but a few of your bars on personals hit hard good vocab could be better but your structure needs work a 5/10
monsoon good second line i liked it whats a modaliisa though?huh?whats a penus?anyways your disses and personals were weak and that killed you2/10

CODEE 08-16-04 10:49 PM

Voted For: pictureperfect2

u killed monsoon on this one man u had great punch lines and good flow
uppin 4 votes
CODEE vs. The Kid P-Dizzle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142734

Logic The Goonie 08-17-04 08:02 PM

Voted For: pictureperfect2

aight another merk fest by my mayn pic. got him on every level

pic- good punches, good structure and great metas
monsoon-weak punches, bad structure and the metas were so-so
overall pic i cant tell u to elevate on anything and monsoon u need to work on ya structure and punches first and the rest later. no hate -1-

M&rk 08-18-04 03:39 PM

upppin

N.Tavarez 08-18-04 03:59 PM

Voted For: pictureperfect2

landslideeeeeee
easy win for pic
ima say monsoon needs to work on vocab, personals,
and punchlines are weak
ima say pic won all cates easy that murda ink line was cool
ima also say monsoon wheneva u want a 'friendly battle'
send me a pm, but both ya keep doing ya thing
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