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MADDRAPPER 08-14-04 04:58 PM

Flow In Motion
 
Flow In Motion

My plot boss like hot sauce write tight lines but like
White wine gets you drunk, few punks tried and now dykes
Got a rigorous spree like a citrus tree shove fruits down
Throats and clowns with quotes never pollutes bounds
Recruits towns like the harmony of the army, bugle sounds
On streets cats march whack and leap with arched backs
Like frogs attack them dogs then saddle great horses with packs
Battle make choices exact, blast brains with gas contained rhymes
Rattle spines and straddle minds wanna beef? But your cattle’s blind
Rhymes have a dim gloss swim across rivers say what where
My boat at? My quotes fat enough to float nucca, now there
One girl had a sex romance potion the expanse of the ocean
I advanced with motion in bed kisses enhance the first notion
She said no, but the bed flow later with juices, thirst potion
Prevail with code bazaar like railroad car down tracks
To smack clowns whack in the head with renown facts
This affair flames like an airplane so get your flights right
And wing your bling read this thing and sleep tight tonight
My scripts hardcore like ships on shore flip more than acrobats do
With facts and stats true, my crew got gatts to slew, wear gangsta hats too

MADDRAPPER 08-15-04 11:12 AM

upping for responses

e-dubz 08-15-04 12:11 PM

not bad, ur flow was pretty good, ur rhyme scheme was simple but it worked pretty nicely..u had some iight vocab in that verse..jus elevate a little but that shit was pretty good

5MICMEDALLION 08-15-04 11:57 PM

My plot boss like hot sauce write tight lines but like
White wine gets you drunk, few punks tried and now dykes
Got a rigorous spree like a citrus tree shove fruits down
Throats and clowns with quotes never pollutes bounds
Recruits towns like the harmony of the army, bugle sounds


Nice hommie,,,7-10
good opener

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-16-04 12:28 AM

7/10 good

MADDRAPPER 08-16-04 01:01 AM

thanks for the score and the love yo


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