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Damn, this shortie yo

You the kinda chic make a nigga wun put his clip up
Clean his act up and set the trash outside for pick up
I thought we had something to brag about, laugh about
You always found me on the Ave about to bag a ounce
Maybe stab a clown, but it was something special 'bout you
Without you I wouldn't feel the urge to bounce from my crew
And start something new and improved with you as my girl
I ain't soft but girl, you made me rethink my whole damn world
Remember that night we was up until six in the mornin'
It was stormin' outside but I ain't find you borin', pourin'
Your mind out to me like I was a cup for your thoughts
I had my doubts but realized I could easily cut my loss
Abruptly toss my corrupt causes for your hugs and kisses
Thinkin' bout takin' u home to meet my mother for Christmas
Maybe be Misses ex-thug for real, have a couple lil' bugs
Runnin' amuck while I give you love, no more bustin' slugs
Hustlin' drugs or mistrustin' youngs, you're the one I want
In this toughest part of life, a wife who is as tough as guns

uh

that was nice i liked this shit straight up, good job man, nice flow and shit

Oh yeah leave a link to were you replied to bro.. leave the link here.

MAN I TOLD U BEFORE DONT LET ME GET MAD PLEASE LEAVE LINKS!!

^yeah, dont let him get mad, because when he do, he goes on a crazy mod power abusing frenzy.

anyway, this was a heartfelt peice, about love, and it had what it seems like, emotion.
but the topic has been done millions of times,
and there isnt really nothing spectacular about it.
so, this peice is mildly mediocre.

I'll give this a 6/10.

BTW, thanks for saying she and wife, instead of he and husband.

^true but i still like it...nice emotion and this is real stuff, so what is subject has been handles a million times? This is the real deal, its normal that more people write drop about it, but nice drop boi...

^^^^Word, preciate it...some people just don't get it

neway...

uppin

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