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BANG 08-14-04 07:07 PM

Fuck Yall doing
 
Yo i thought this site was a fuckin battle site where cats come from all over to perfect they artform?


If you wanna get some or show ya booty
Yall can complain all ya but you aint gon' move me/
Yall tryin to find a spouse go to a love site-
Round here real niggas lookin for them glove fights/
Some cats postin pics of hoes they aint got
Im perfecting the flow for the dough I aint got/
This is not a diss-this is just my perspective
So if you tryin to get paid i suggest you change ya directive/
This is the start of a collective Niggas Tryin to Succeed
Cus basically yall gonna be the Niggas With no Need
of a deal cus yall aint focused thats just the facts
you can say fuck the wax but soon its gonna come back at ya
and I'ma be there on top staring down at ya

Bang

G_$peed 08-14-04 07:10 PM

nice shit


THIS IS NOT FEED BACK "NICE SHIT" IS NOT FEEDBACK LEAVE FEEDBACK ruff i'm warrning you.

- Mask.

Enhance 08-14-04 07:19 PM

Keep elevating Pz.

Oh yeah leave a link to were you replied to bro.. leave the link here.

BANG 08-14-04 07:22 PM

Like Jigga said "its just my thoughts" . Although there aint no comparison now but thats where im trying to be feel me?

BANG 08-14-04 07:38 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142443

this what you talkin bout man?

BANG 08-14-04 11:47 PM

Can i get some feedback on this shit.

BANG 08-16-04 01:47 AM

Lookin for that feedback foreal man.

BANG 08-16-04 12:41 PM

Yo I need feedback im addicted to this shit.

Tha Q 08-16-04 12:44 PM

I liked the use of repetition in "I ain't got"


hackneyed topic...and your imagery wasn't strong enough to rehash a commn theme

decent rhyming...just up complexity


1

BANG 08-17-04 11:44 AM

word word aight. upppin for more feedback.

yOuNG tIPS 08-17-04 12:45 PM

that shit was cool but with a name like bang come harder my nigga but all love.....1


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