New User Here, Listen and Critique
 

Me and some of my boys just do this shit when we are drunk or bored as hell...we arent like most idiots and thinking we are the next Eminem or gonna jump straight to the top. We might even suck or we might sound decent. We don't really know cause we have never put it out...tell what you think...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/kayraymusic.htm :hump:

this was good, for ya first time in audio, the hook was catchy, and you guys did ya thing, all i would say for improvement would be to spit with more emotion and the flow would get better, besides that i like it..word

Liked the hooks. where nice.

turn up the volume on the verse.
work on ur delivery and emotion like moon said. -1