afropimp vs natedogg
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
NO dr no hate no bullshit

Minimum posts to vote: 45

Check in by: 08-15-04 at 03:33 AM

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afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 03:07 AM.

natedogg has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 03:08 AM.

ok dogg u fuck with the wrong dogg ok hug dont hate me dogg the bull shit is not comeing from me it is come from red bull and you so stop fuck with the bull and start fuck with your mother ok ass hole cuck sucker mother fucker go fuck your mom in the ass and come back and tell me how it went ok and one more thing you might win this time but the next i got this ok ray so dont come close to me or you might get shut ok you are off get shut wih your own cum you sick mother fucker hell ya i am ridein to night ass hole and if you gota bitch u best hide her cuz red bull might shit on her with all his bull shit he is talkin ok you go now

wen i step to tha keyboard u no thats war
im a pimp takin ur whore thats badgurl (his sig)
ur flow is too week// it reminds me of dro wit no THC
dont try 2 hide it i no ur records 0- and three
its me// thats tha answer to all ur problems
bring em 2 me and i will solve em
if you starvin ill feed u 9 mills
stix and stones may brake yo bones but my words kill
ur like orange juice tha way i beat u to a pulp
i merked you fully i even got ur vote
im cold// my flow leaves atheseus prayin 2 GOD(atheseus dont beleive in god)
cuz im raw// how u gonna bite tha name NATEDOGG



its kinda wak but im tired and sober

no hate but no way im gettin wit u u suck dogg u need to elevate hury up and vote for this battle i won

ass hole i what to go one more time
 

hi ass do you what to go one more time or not cuz your ass is mine

y would i go again man i won u aint gonna beat me

Voted For: afropimp

give it 2 NATEDOGG
cuz AFROPIMP's was
fuckin garbage nuttin
rhymed n it made no
fuckin sense
v/NATEDOGG
vote on deez battles honestly
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139290

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312

Jono
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463

my fault i voted 4
NATEDOGG but posted
n da wrong 1

Voted For: afropimp

Ok imma giv it to nate yo structure made it real hard to read wit no commas full-stops or dashes also wrote in a paragraph...................afro's punches were weak ...no personals from either but nates was harder....tha ones i could read.............u need to think about presentation.....no1 will bother voting if you don't think about presenting it.......

Vote:natedogg

shit i got yo' names mixed i meant afro' was harder lol......i fuked this vote up.....jus swap tha two names.............

Voted For: afropimp

v/afropimp because he said some structure and natedogg was tellin a story...

This was feedback posted for natedogg
 

hahaha wow......why would you rep my name in that verse??? you probably had that prewritten for me and thats why you kept pming me to battle, damn your lucky i said you were to much of a herb

Voted For: afropimp

Afropimp took this with better structure and better rhyming. None of the punches really connected, but Afro's drop wa sa lot more original. Nate, that's not a verse, that's a run-on sentence...no hate though, you just need some practice.
Vote - afropimp

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