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Manipulation vs <UzI>
Battle Rules:
Unlimited lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-18-04 at 09:31 AM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
<UzI> has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 09:31 AM.
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<UzI> has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 09:31 AM.
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<UzI> has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 09:31 AM.
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MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 09:33 AM.
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Manipulation, im gonna manipulate yo' rhymez-U a old ass vet so ill b kind,
UzI catch tha blast of a hype verse,-My rap burst,leavin in a hearse,Believe me nigga i can do worst, I come ruff tuff like a elefant tusk-Ill make ya head rush wid a hot flush, Causin terror -Quick damage ya' whole-vet-ass-era, Coz ull b locked da fuk up behind ya old ass barz-My rhymes makin u ill like u got sars, I rip it hardcore like porno-flick bitches,I fly high like sabrina tha teenage witch, Ill verballyassault ya eardrum wid my lyrically gifted tongue, Murder 1 my style shot ya like a air-rifle gun, Coz im mo' rugged den a slavemans boots, New recruits,Im fuckin up MC Troops. So nigga be4 startin up a ruckus, Think about it coz ull end up in pieces in a kentucky fried chicken bucket. |
ima quickly shoot this wack newb called uzi...
this guy wudnt know heat...spittin in a jaccuzi.. givin us an hour, and a half to post a verse.. ima shut ya mouth quik..like a closed purse.. a hearse gona b cumin for ya dead rhymes.. u cudnt see through a hot verse..u like closed blnds... guy outta his mind, probably cum wit gay lines.. coz ur style more smoked out...than woodbines.. guy cudnt b dealt a winnin hand, playin card games.. wack brains, whered u cum up wit that wack name?.. destined to rep ya name...u dead like takin "uzi" ta ya brain.. u drowning like a digestive in tea..coz u are 2 plain... he gona pre-write...and still lose wit unlimited lines... im like "vertabra"..quik ta split ya wit n ya back spines... *PICKS UP A LIL NOW* if you were cling-film, a RAPPER..still wudnt b your fate... ima leave u in the gutter..where u can claim to be GREAT.. you been "stinking" up more LINES..than socks out ta dry.. putting "crack" in your lines,wudnt make them elevate high... you creatin more smell than a grate opened with a pry-bar... ima uncover your attempt at "filler"..as if u woz a "rung"car.. fuck it, this battles over...nearly as quick as it began.. you "blow" a lot of air..i`ll rename you "my biggest fan".. one more thing ta say..retire from rap,u borin,lack tha heat... ud make it real good at...."coachin insomniacs ta sleep!".. |
Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
lmmao wtf u'z a crazy chick arent ya manip....lmmao good verse......both ya did good uzi u tried 4 a newbie against well dis short time vet.....n e ways....... punches:manip metas:manip vocab:manip flow:both structure:both multi's:none dat i saw personals:manip vote manip.........again good battle u got balls battlin manip as a newbie dats kool holla back peace |
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
tuff like elephant tusks''fly high like sabrina the witch''.....NO!!that was horrible no strcture ar punches or disses it was BAD uzi but you do have a nice wordplay3/10 man good wordplay ok punches i was feeling a few but some were also weak not as weak as his but not good nice flow and vocab a 6/10 |
This was feedback posted for &lt;UzI&gt;
Didnt get that sabrina thing but good battle
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
Manip shut him down! She came with better wordplay, harder punches and overall good structure. I like how you in almost every battle of yours I've seen you've made punches with things that are common in female life (i.e the "closed purse" line). Uzi, when you're not biting your verses you lack punches, elevate if you don't get banned for you little "Wu Tang" fiasco against TURBAN... Vote - MaNiPuLaTiOn Return the favor, honest votes only... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142734 |
^Whoops, I didn't know he already got banned, lol...
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
Manipulations verse's structure was a lil more straight forward......more personal...........nice punches.....wordplay was thrown in too.....multies were there and bulided up into some nice punches/pesonals Uzi..........still new here and jus needs to elevate and work on improvin yo' punches and pesonals........ Vote: Manipulation |
Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
i gota give this 2 manipulation..she had better punches an just better personals |
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