intensify effect vs optimized
 

defult rules 10 lines do or die SON!!! do or DIE!!

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Check in by: 08-16-04 at 12:10 AM

Must drop verse in 600 minutes after check in.

haha this will be a snap


so dont front on me now

optimized has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 05:47 PM.

come on kid im ready check-in........................

I.E dont wanna try me
cuz u wont fit the W like shaq shoe size
when i attact u'll die
its only fair i'll bring u a castket in exchange for u'r blue-eyes
when i shot peoples should duck
cause when i bust them slug's the shells will fit ya girls D-cup
if u bet me then u seen luck
because this aint going right like left handed pitcher
ya verse will be soft and ya dick hard
because why put pussys in a male rap-board
i know u like girls but rather have boys
and my verse will make more nose then a baby-toy

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 08:14 PM.

why do u set up battles without the person u battling knowing???

but whatever since u wanna go ahead and set it up i will go ahead and drop clown....

u wont get pass me this time, check how im flowing
u'r skills un-notice, like seting this up without me knowing
why battle when you rhymes are out of perportion
optimized a living reason why more people should be supportin abortion
look,
how hes tryna spit dirty, but yet hes leavin me dirtless
His chance of havin skill is like Hitler doing community service
Everyones knows you got nothing, and i dont think they was talkin bout ya sig,
Because your lines went out of style, about the same time as-big.... *when he died*
don't fuck with me when each bar u spit is like commiting suicide
u'r votes section will be blank like "drive-by" "widout da ride
dog, its like a curse the way i spit a verse and set u in a hearst
and have you stressin u've been fuck like a prostitute in a church

BANG-BANG-EARLy...........

dont ever set up another battle without me knowing.....
only,
i will if its only need it U clown ass bitch........

Voted For: intensify effect

intensify effect won this easily. He came with better structure, harder punches, and some good wordplay. Optimized didn't really have much to his verse, it was quite simple. But with some practice you'll get better man...
Vote - intensify effect

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