Y-O-U-N-G: New Drop from Young Smirf listen
 

ayo this is young smirf and after you listen to my song give some real feedback. Holla at me!!!!

http://www.soundclick.com/youngsmirf

ayo, give some feedback on this shit i busted my ass to make this shit. come on now!!!!

You needed to be a little clearer....I could hardly make out what you were saying. A lot of the shit you were saying was kinda played (pubic hair line). Need a little more breath control.....sounded like you were breathing in deep at times. You can hide that a little if you get a mic filter or just put a sock over it. Flow was OK at times and off at others. Work on your consistency......nice drop though :thumbup:

y-o-u-n-G

thanx and i had to talk a little louder cuz my voice i horse so bear wit me....

uppin....

ayo, can i get some more feedback pleaz.... honest feedback only...