"Stayin On Me" post feedback
 

freestyle chekc it out:

I rock this world up with my dileries words some people say im absurd/1
Cuz I like stayin up on third with my hunny’s so you better have heard/.2
That I am dangerous, cruise threw the world with my crazy attitude/3
I hope you like me when I say this cuz ill give you all my gratitude/.4
When we’ll be ridden threw the town ill be telling you when im down/5
Yer all on me like yer a hound for my body stop that spots bound/.6
Ill whisper in yer ear and yer boy that’s snoopin around will be scared with fear/.7
Cuz ill chase him down he’ll be scared so tell him to holla if he hear/.8

yo i likedit but needs to be longer

i kno but i tred rapin it to like 5 beats it dosent realy work i hafe to rap it slow then lol

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