Gangsta Culture
 

yo you aint gonna like wut i have to say now
i'll come and blow you mutha fuckin brains out
igga shut it before you fuckin get laid out
you gonna blasted on and not lasted on
you'll look super with a fuckin caskid on
i'll rap foeva even until dawn so shut son
lets get the AK's and gats out of the back
and lay out the mutha fucka that talks back




yo ppl this shit aint done cuz i'm too tired to finish it it'll be finished lates

Garbage

ok its wut you think

yo view my shit yo

nice shit yo man that was tight

^wtf?
this shit wasnt tight.
this was short, wack and garbage.
elevate man.
get a solid topic, and stick with it.
you have slight potential, but this peice wasnt good at all.

yo man thanx foir the advice shit

c'mon ppl view my shit

garbage

i dont need to hear that twice

Young_gun that was fun and it was real. But it wasn't really fun! Ha Ha. Sucka

listian dog, u couldent lay out a child
yo rymes are weak, u jus in denile

not talkin about that, place wit the pyramids
catch u slippin boy, the gun placed in yo ribs

then, when they carry'n yo fuckin caskit-
ima do ah drive by n let them hoes have it

:shoot:

yo lets battle take your shit to the rings mutha fucka lets do it.

Not feelin it all that much dawg u need to strengthen on ur topic and increase the wordplay but i feel you have potential don't listen to herbs who jus say GARBAGE coz they prolly can't make anything better than that

thanx man if you read wut i replyed i dont care wut they think my mind is on feed back so they can hate all they want i dont hate haters