Demon Pyrokronix vs illuson
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-19-04 at 06:10 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Demon Pyrokronix has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 06:18 AM.

illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 06:21 AM.

i cant belive dis shit its crazy
more then my split personality 2shady
3 battles in less then 3 minutes
but demon ya finshed
ya carrer end so fast itll wind up in gunnies
ill rape demon
and cover his fuckin body in semen
pyrokronix
ill play like sonic
ya dreams ill haunt em
chase ya down
turn around
and beat ya fuckin face in
theyll need dental records to i.d. ya
this shit leave ya wit no idea
wonderin why it happen
now get the fuck away before i get my can of whopp as crakin

Yo... yo... yo...

Aiming at your head, I couldn't miss when I'm locked on,
Flock to a sanctuary fore I blast your cock with a shotgun,
C'mmon son, you can't take on a Demon nuclear fusion,
There no confusion, your victory is the biggest fuckin illusion.
If it was dawdling by your head you still couldn't catch it,
Throw you down in a casket and smash your dreams with a hatchet,
And now your only elation is when you're trying masturbation,
You're chances of victory are as blank as your occupation,
I'm leaving you now, stop shitting yourself and celebrate,
Next time you come against me remember to fuckin elevate.

This was meant to be 10 lines man but whatever.

His occupation says nothing.

Illusion is his name.

I don't really think there's anything else I need to explain.

Erm... dude why did you say you'd rape me and cover me in seamon? That's gay man. What are you a faggot? No hate.

Uppin 1..............................

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

Demon had better flow n more understandable so my vote is for him

Aight, you could've posted a bit more info though because that might be deleted and on RB I had all my 5 votes deletd by a mod who thought I was dickriding. Really fucked up, I don't want the same to happen here.
Thanx anyway.

Uppin 2....

aiight for suure erase that vote then

Oops too late already voted, c'mmon I left decent feedback in your battle amn. But W/E, keep that mediocre explanation then.

Uppin, Illusion when I run out of ups you have to help out.

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

Shit man, Pyro came much stronger than illusion, his verse had structure, made sense and rhymed well.

Illusion needs to elevate a lot man, Pyro took this no doubt, but i think you need to elevate still, the gunplay just doesnt work on rap sites

This was feedback posted for Demon Pyrokronix
 

nice verse demon, good flow and personals, you had a good structure as well. illusion, your verse was a bit basic to be honest, you were using simple vocab and flow was a bit off. try to up ya vocab though.

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

Yo Demon Pyrokronix Took this wit Better Punches, Structure, Flow, and a OVerall Better Verse, You could Work On yah Vocab a little Bit, and work wit some Wordplay, also yah punches were there, but not Very Strong..Keep Elevating..!!

Illusion, yo man you gotta work on yah structure, ALOT.. And Flow, Structure, and a Complete New Style, B/c No hate, but it was wacked.. Try Reading Other Battles,, And see how they Work there verse.. Punches, wordplay, and such... Not hate.. Peace

Retrun the Fav on a battle in my sig.. !!!!!!!

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

ok neither of you had strong punches but demon had good vocab and flow was nice while ill had nothing at all no good anything ill needs to elevate in all areas so this was a easy win for demon

Damn don't you think you were a bit harsh Empire, I totally took this battle with evrything, hands down.

I guess Ye_biathc@hotmail.com was right about people downing your verse for gunplay. Wierd or what?

Anyway uppin for K.O.