String9487 vs SLicK~SKiLLz
 

Battle Rules:

5-15 Lines
No Crew Votes,hate,dr
No Recycling
No Biting,feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 04:49 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

SLicK~SKiLLz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 04:20 PM.

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 04:23 PM.

Hey gimme dat
BITCH give it!
BaNG!

Wut up ~string~ ready to fell the power of my ~sting
u shoulda thought ~twice~ im slicker then ~ice~
nigga i aint a crackhead i dont play ~dice~
i play this real shit the rv.com ~shit~
im throwin bones to every emcee like a mosh ~pit~
my flows are hotter then ~hell~ got u in ~jail~ rubbin ur ~tit~
its turnin u on when u read this ~spit~
im sicker then the worst ~cold~ im like ur mom in an argument u get ~told~
ur no ~competetion~ ive killed so many emcees i think its an ~addiction~
so dont run now cause its time for ur ~loss~ im fellin guilty for claiming this wild ~toss~

yoo yo
i dont know what type of shit u stay on
but i spit bullets that'll make ya "hood hop" like J-kwon
yo when i spit my shits ill, cuz my shit kills
nething wack shit t done my "slickskills"
i spit fire that'll melt ya hairline
only time ya rhymes "fly" is on Delta Airlines
n dog aint nuttin i've as wack as those verbals
duck, i pack bigger "shells" than Galapagos turtles
niggas want a couple multies ima give em a couple
coupled wit a couple doubles that'll get em in trouble
yo this nigga aint hardcore
if rappin was shootin, u wouldnt hit the side of barn door
i got counter tactics for this wack bitch
he aint think i ripped him, but shit yall know
Slickskills got mo "Bull" than CHI-CA-GO

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Voted For: String9487

damn string that was good I gotta give it to ya nice flow and punchlines
uppin 4 votes
CODEE vs. The Kid P-Dizzle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142734

next time kids explain the vote kthx cause i'd like to no how and why u voted for the person u did

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Voted For: String9487

Slick- Good Flow, Structure Ok, Punches Didnt Hit Hard

String- Ok Personals, Punches Didnt Hit Hard, Ok Flow, Didnt Like Structure

Punches- Tie
Personals- String
Flow- Skills
Wordplay- Niether
Metaphors- String
Structure- Tie
Originality- Tie

V- String

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Voted For: String9487

Damn, nice verses from both, but i gotta go wit string... String you started off weak, too much "thug" shit about shells and shit, but you really picked up.. you had nice multies which helped ya flow, and you had nice punchlines, not really any personals, but ya punches hit hard, and a nice rhyme scheme, i liked ya closer and the Delta airlines line, but lose the "shells" thug shit.... Slick you had a decent verse, but the ~ threw me off, took away from ya flow.. Ya punches was played, like the "turnin you on" shit, but you had decent rhymes, and some decent punches, but you lacked creativity and wordplay in my mind..... So my vote goes to String, with better punches, better flow and a more creative verse

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