Paramik vs Natedogg
 

Battle Rules:

2 linmes punch
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 40

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 05:11 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

natedogg has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 04:52 PM.

Paramik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 05:00 PM.

Ya Ya I Dont Know I Feel Like Im Walkin Alone Into The Valley Of The Shadow Of Death If I Go I Am Takein Ever One With Me Oo I Just Dot Know I Might Just Let You Go Alone I Don Know If I Should Letu Go But I Know Something I It Aint Over Yet Id Be Willing To Bet I Will Be Down To Death So Let Me Go I Just Dont Know Yet I Am Ready To Go I Am Always Ready To Die So Let Me Go Just Let Me Go And I Dont Care If I Lose It Aint Going To Be The Last Or The First So Give Methe Best You Got I Am Ready For It So Let It Out I Am Going To Let Out My Battle Cry Cuz I Am On The Front Line So I Am Ready To Die Dont Ever Trie To Fine Me Ill Shock U With All My Power It Will Make The Earth Shake Break Through These Chais Break Through These Gates So Hold On Dogg Cuz Its Just Began So Let It Out Cuz I Will Live A Great After Shock Cuz My Power Is So Big It Will Kill Ever One I Its Peat So Let It

I throw 3rd degree burns like passing college three times.
This guy couldn’t pass pre-school if he knew all his rhymes.

wtf that isnt a punchline

Voted For: Paramik

i have ta vote 4 paramik..i really couldnt see tha flow nate...u gota break that whole paragraph into bars..its not uh essay...
v/p

This was feedback posted for Paramik
 

ok, paramik gets the vote..but i don't have enuff posts =/

first off.. natedogg didnt follow the rules, which should be d.q.
second, ummm..your rhyme scheme is horrible, and looks lame (no Offense)..Paramik had a decent punch not great, but good enuff to beat your best line outta that verse..

Voted For: Paramik

lol,k,paramik got this,cos his one punchline was more thn natedogg had in his whole verse,nate,tht wasnt a battle verse,more like a topical or summet,so yer,paramik,one nice punchline did it 4 ya,nate u need to elavate,and understand wot battlein is.

my vote-paramik

Voted For: Paramik

wtf nate..................?????? this was a punchline battle and u wrote like 15 lines............. for me, nate is d'qd and paramik wins by default........... the line was aight, but i wasnt really feelin it........theres not much more to say about this lil battle..........

upping 1 on this battle please vote

Voted For: Paramik

Lol P took this hands-down, simply 'cuz he followed the rules. He hit him with a funny punch, kinda personal, good stuff overall. Natedogg, this is a punchline battle, and you didn't deliver a punchline - it's simple as that. And when you gonna quit duckin' my challenges so we can battle?
Vote - Paramik

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This was feedback posted for Paramik
 

at first i thought this was a joke then i looked and saw niggas is serious lol.nate you went wayyyyyyyyyyy over the line limit but paramik strobe said you cant do no less then 6 lines so basically this battle should be closed yall both wasting threads

Voted For: Paramik

Paramik's urs was short but it made sense I don't know whats up with Nate's flow I can't understand it
uppin 4 votes
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