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L.I. 08-16-04 05:41 PM

Premanition (3-3) vs ...Superior... (3-0-1) Lightweight Championship!!
 
Challenger = Premanition
Current Champ = ...Superior...

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Do yall thang and goodluck...

...Voke... 08-16-04 10:27 PM

check....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142901
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142919

Premanition 08-17-04 01:59 PM

check....12 lines dawg?

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1512920
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1518225

...Voke... 08-17-04 05:31 PM

yea thats cool...

Premanition 08-18-04 05:16 PM

decisive victories but not tight?...either u 'sucked dick' or were just polite...
future days spent upright...get off ya knees bitch, this site knows u 'bite'...
not in depth wen I talk about ur past...it contradicts my name, so im vast...
'superior' just a new mask...still a bitch tricking newbies for an easy task..(link 1)
its a fuckin shame...u got me hoping for no verse but a post thats plain...
jus so i don't have to compare mine previous to ensure its not the same...
put ur verses through an examination…u fail due to lack of dedication…
not satisfied with just one mention……………………………………⠀¦
………….in ‘The Wall Of Shame’ u want a standing ovation…………..(link 2)
u being a moderator on this site…is the proudest moment of ya life……
not happy, contemplatin suicide…like me u waitin on a ‘steak knife’…(mag late)
punchline league….banned for 2 weeks in a row but still got picked to go…
coincidently drawn with ‘superior’...or was it cos he knew I wudnt show..(link 3/4)


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=135245 - Link 1
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ighlight=deleon - Link 2
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139269 - Link 3
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140920 - Link 4 (neva got a pm)

uppin ur verse...

...Voke... 08-19-04 08:18 PM

And NOW a demonstration…to This begger, this blind bum
It’s kinda dumb ya name’s what it is,n’ yet…I’m where u got ya Eyes from
I destroy the set; more then pissed actors and leave this kid with contusions
...............................................And if you see yourself beating me?
Then your looking threw a window of false dreams into a world of illusions
U ain’t the clown of the week…this battle ain’t been months in waitin
Your Thursday's bacon…n ur gettin sounded out like pronunciation
Prems weak its time I bring him into the light
he needs a astma pump the way he's breathing on the mic *
And honestly, I’ll smack whoever think this scrubs equal
Prem used to be an exterminator no wonder all he does is bug people**
It’s funny you’d risk your steez, just for a damn net title
After this call Prem Ruben, cause he’ll be the next idle (idol)

*he does audio
**he pms me everytime he no shows and begs not to get banned

Premanition 08-20-04 11:57 AM

uppin....nice battle sup.....

...Voke... 08-20-04 09:57 PM

uppin

Pop Lotty 08-21-04 12:41 AM

decisive victories but not tight?...either u 'sucked dick' or were just polite...
future days spent upright...get off ya knees bitch, this site knows u 'bite'...
6/10...personal, but no punch
not in depth wen I talk about ur past...it contradicts my name, so im vast...
'superior' just a new mask...still a bitch tricking newbies for an easy task..(link 1)
6/10...ok.....
its a fuckin shame...u got me hoping for no verse but a post thats plain...
jus so i don't have to compare mine previous to ensure its not the same...
5/10...wtf are you talkin about son...
put ur verses through an examination…u fail due to lack of dedication…
not satisfied with just one mention……………………………………⠀¦
………….in ‘The Wall Of Shame’ u want a standing ovation…………..(link 2)
5/10...this coulda been hot, but u worded it bad...
u being a moderator on this site…is the proudest moment of ya life……
not happy, contemplatin suicide…like me u waitin on a ‘steak knife’…(mag late)
7/10...liked this one...
punchline league….banned for 2 weeks in a row but still got picked to go…
coincidently drawn with ‘superior’...or was it cos he knew I wudnt show..(
6/10...your kinda dissin yourself, showin ppl that your a regular no shower..
overall - 5.83...wasnt really feelin your verse...your structure is stretced lookin too...


And NOW a demonstration…to This begger, this blind bum
It’s kinda dumb ya name’s what it is,n’ yet…I’m where u got ya Eyes from
7.5...good shit...
I destroy the set; more then pissed actors and leave this kid with contusions
...............................................And if you see yourself beating me?
Then your looking threw a window of false dreams into a world of illusions
6/10...not feelin..
U ain’t the clown of the week…this battle ain’t been months in waitin
Your Thursday's bacon…n ur gettin sounded out like pronunciation
6/10...i dont understand how bad soundin out is...but it was a punch
Prems weak its time I bring him into the light
he needs a astma pump the way he's breathing on the mic *
6/10...so he does audio......
And honestly, I’ll smack whoever think this scrubs equal
Prem used to be an exterminator no wonder all he does is bug people**
7/10...good
It’s funny you’d risk your steez, just for a damn net title
After this call Prem Ruben, cause he’ll be the next idle (idol)
5/10...dont get it....
overall - 6.25...decent drop, had some good punches in there...
v/Superior

Premanition 08-21-04 06:06 AM

[QUOTE=Shabba Ranks]decisive victories but not tight?...either u 'sucked dick' or were just polite...
future days spent upright...get off ya knees bitch, this site knows u 'bite'...
6/10...personal, but no punch
not in depth wen I talk about ur past...it contradicts my name, so im vast...
'superior' just a new mask...still a bitch tricking newbies for an easy task..(link 1)
6/10...ok.....
its a fuckin shame...u got me hoping for no verse but a post thats plain...
jus so i don't have to compare mine previous to ensure its not the same...
5/10...wtf are you talkin about son...

^^^he bites...fuck me ur in the final n u don't get that? shit!!!!!!

put ur verses through an examination…u fail due to lack of dedication…
not satisfied with just one mention……………………………………⠀¦
………….in ‘The Wall Of Shame’ u want a standing ovation…………..(link 2)
5/10...this coulda been hot, but u worded it bad...
u being a moderator on this site…is the proudest moment of ya life……
not happy, contemplatin suicide…like me u waitin on a ‘steak knife’…(mag late)
7/10...liked this one...
punchline league….banned for 2 weeks in a row but still got picked to go…
coincidently drawn with ‘superior’...or was it cos he knew I wudnt show..(
6/10...your kinda dissin yourself, showin ppl that your a regular no shower..
overall - 5.83...wasnt really feelin your verse...your structure is stretced lookin too...



o.k wot eva uppin

...Voke... 08-21-04 10:09 AM

^^stop swaying.........

Premanition 08-22-04 12:14 PM

uppin.............................

Poppa Kap 08-22-04 12:40 PM

decisive victories but not tight?...either u 'sucked dick' or were just polite...
future days spent upright...get off ya knees bitch, this site knows u 'bite'...
fuck the multies u shudda focused on this personal more. It had potential but even tho it was a personal it came elementry.

not in depth wen I talk about ur past...it contradicts my name, so im vast...
'superior' just a new mask...still a bitch tricking newbies for an easy task..(link 1)
was ok.

its a fuckin shame...u got me hoping for no verse but a post thats plain...
jus so i don't have to compare mine previous to ensure its not the same...
what?

put ur verses through an examination…u fail due to lack of dedication…
not satisfied with just one mention……………………………………⠀¦
………….in ‘The Wall Of Shame’ u want a standing ovation…………..(link 2)
liked this.

u being a moderator on this site…is the proudest moment of ya life……
not happy, contemplatin suicide…like me u waitin on a ‘steak knife’…(mag late)
nah

punchline league….banned for 2 weeks in a row but still got picked to go…
coincidently drawn with ‘superior’...or was it cos he knew I wudnt show..(link 3/4)
hm..

I werent really feeling much from ur verse.

And NOW a demonstration…to This begger, this blind bum
It’s kinda dumb ya name’s what it is,n’ yet…I’m where u got ya Eyes from
haha.

I destroy the set; more then pissed actors and leave this kid with contusions
...............................................And if you see yourself beating me?
Then your looking threw a window of false dreams into a world of illusions
flow was off. but it was nice wordplay.

U ain’t the clown of the week…this battle ain’t been months in waitin
Your Thursday's bacon…n ur gettin sounded out like pronunciation
haha nice.

Prems weak its time I bring him into the light
he needs a astma pump the way he's breathing on the mic *
nah

And honestly, I’ll smack whoever think this scrubs equal
Prem used to be an exterminator no wonder all he does is bug people**
played

It’s funny you’d risk your steez, just for a damn net title
After this call Prem Ruben, cause he’ll be the next idle (idol)
didnt great feel but was ok.

u came better than prem, u had more quotables

Vote Sup

...Voke... 08-23-04 05:30 PM

Monday........2-0 Superior Wins

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