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INFALLIBLE 08-16-04 06:58 PM

Fr3MiSoul vs INFALLIBLE
 
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UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 07:28 PM

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System 08-16-04 07:00 PM

Fr3MiSoul has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 07:00 PM.

System 08-16-04 07:07 PM

INFALLIBLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 07:07 PM.

Fr3MiSoul 08-16-04 07:15 PM

if u say u can beat me in the is battle u b a liar//
u got things mixed up like a weaf biter// (wife beater)
u need to retire/u cant win if u dont leap higher//
i'll chew u up like bubble gum/son/u in trouble punk//
when i think about u rappin i just chuckle chump//
and with the name infallible, u think u cant fail//
too bad u faced me first and i made u a tall tale//
ur rhymes r like a week old biscuit, they're stale//
give this game up, choose a different trail//

INFALLIBLE 08-16-04 07:29 PM

See I be havin bad dreams about doin bad things
come thru and ur momma is gone its a sad scene
and the devils laughin,if there was such a thing
u couldn't weigh dudes problems out wit a human triple beam
u all fucked up, and u'll find ur moms up in da dump truck
I got gin in my cup, and ur bitch is sickin on my duck
I mean suckin upon my dick, don't care if she swallows or spits
long as I get mines which will happen regardless
and really I ain't got shit, 4 me to prove 2 u
so quit tryin 2 b someone else cuz and focus on doin u
the only way u'll win this match is if I get hated on
cause every verse I drop, is like Heroshima drop "tha bomb"
so I think 4 now at least i'm through wit ur sorry ass
and I'm really not a frestyler I'm usually in it 4 da cash

Fr3MiSoul 08-16-04 09:15 PM

ight, nice verse, i liked the line about heroshima.. well newayz .. uppin 4 votes

ChristsideSoulja 08-16-04 09:27 PM

Voted For: Fr3MiSoul

... i'ma have to give this one to Fr3, just liked it more, next time IN, u should focus on the person ur battlin instead of the person's mom...
victory=Fr3MiSoul

50Cal. 08-16-04 09:32 PM

Voted For: INFALLIBLE

fr good wordplay but you need to work on punches and disses yours were weak as heel and your struture and vocab need help fo real 2/10
inf no vocab either but better then fr good struture and flow was easy to catch you didnt have good punches or disses either but you were a little better only cuz struture 3/10

CODEE 08-16-04 10:15 PM

Voted For: INFALLIBLE

I'm gonna give u this one Infallible cause u got his ass ur flow was good and u had some punch lines even though u hated on my ass I'll give u this vote

DRAG~ON 08-17-04 11:44 AM

Voted For: INFALLIBLE

INFALLIBLE had da better flow
a lil wordplay n way harder hittin
punches so
v/INFALLIBLE
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.:Blaid`e'ums:. 08-20-04 07:35 PM

Voted For: INFALLIBLE

u got good rhymes..........................8.9/10

Ill-Grammatix 08-20-04 08:12 PM

Voted For: INFALLIBLE

well... i could tell a lie... or I could tell the truth...so since i ain't scared of getting on with either one of you or any one else for that matter... and since I ain't gotta lie to kick it omma start by saying both of these verses sucked ass... it's just that Fr3 sucked a lot more... In came kinda corny with lines like:

and the devils laughin,if there was such a thing
u couldn't weigh dudes problems out wit a human triple beam
u all fucked up, and u'll find ur moms up in da dump truck
I got gin in my cup, and ur bitch is sickin on my duck

and Fr3 came back with :


IP:


if u say u can beat me in the is battle u b a liar//
u got things mixed up like a weaf biter// (wife beater)
u need to retire/u cant win if u dont leap higher//
i'll chew u up like bubble gum/son/u in trouble punk//
when i think about u rappin i just chuckle chump//
and with the name infallible, u think u cant fail//
too bad u faced me first and i made u a tall tale//
ur rhymes r like a week old biscuit, they're stale//
give this game up, choose a different trail//

I mean really....his whole verse was worse than those four lines... In definitely had better structure and flow... shyt rhymed but the punces were weak and personals were non-existant... Fr3 needs to work on everything from beginning to end without skipping shyt in the middle... get a rhyme book or sum'n... you prolly the first person I'd ever tell to go bite sumbody's shyt...

no hate... just tough love!


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