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sinn 08-16-04 09:06 PM

my 1st post
 
ionno what the bizness is with this site really but...ima jus gonna go ahead and spit some shit



now playboy whatchu know bout that, whatchu know bout rollin blunts like baseball bats, whatchu bout stompin these hatas flat, thats how its said and thas how its done, boy dont u kno u fuckin wit numba 1? dident think so but i letcha get a verse, but playin wit me dog getcha layed up in hearse, u aint neva gonna find a style better then mine, dog if u lookin u jus wastin yah time

ionno thas my first post

intensify effect 08-16-04 09:24 PM

dont worry u will get better, try seprateing ya lines dont just squeezem all together like that it makes it harder to read and follow the flow, work on ya punches and work on ya creativeness since its ya first drop i aint gonna hate or drop a negative feed back but just elevate and work on some shit befor u just drop anything.....

cool....

sinn 08-16-04 10:15 PM

number2
 
alright then dog here go numba two
verse so serious itll take outcha crew

i dont givah damn who u wit or where u from
the only thing u gon see is the flash of the gun

like a good crowd, i jus got to clappin
reached for yo chain, and i got to snatchin

then ima walk like nothin fuckin happend
u got shot ova some bullshit rappin

:shoot:
hahaha

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-16-04 11:22 PM

um you suck buddy get off rb or rv yer a wack wannabe

sinn 08-16-04 11:34 PM

haha ooooook
 
haha tru tru well if u can do better then spit it, and if u aint gonna spit nothin n talk shit, then dont even open ure cocksucka :thefinger

TURBAN 08-16-04 11:38 PM

dont worry that fag hates everyone , you learn'n jus like me so keep it straight


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