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Trooper vs intensify effect
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8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 35 minz 2 post Minimum posts to vote: 170 Check in by: 08-17-04 at 10:40 PM Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in. |
Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 10:43 PM.
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Understand your "Intensity Effect" Is Non Existent, Up ya Spirit Lay Corspe Ova ya Bars & u still wouldnt have Death Difying Lyrix Your Lyrical Alliance is the Opposite of ~"Penis" Pussyfying Raps U Defeatin me is Un heard of like a Parapalegic doin Hand Clap's Flamabile Liquids Will Delete ya ~"Significance",My name Sticks You couldnt spit~ "Sik"~~ if you had "Chlamidia" On your Lips Its Different,If your an ~"Effect" it wasent in my Rememberance If u had "Einstein Cerabelum"u still wouldnt come wit Intelligance [b] |
intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 11:29 PM.
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u'r 20-1 but u'r chances of wining its plenty to none when faceing da best
spit that fire that'll burn ya face like ya avator cuz im the nightmare in text See, I’m the reason that they make plenty coffins While you’re known to take second quicker than Kenny Lofton Plus when I'm readin votes, u won't see me frown Cuz ur chances are so remote, they could turn tha tv down Yea, I'm splittin ur breast, shots'll injure ur chest Cuz my arrows hit close to home, like hittin refresh BANG-BANG-EARLY..... |
Garbage lol
He called me out ya Lol fuckin Joke Uppin 4 votes in this bitch |
Uppin
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peep whos talking...
U Defeatin me is Un heard of like a Parapalegic doin Hand Clap's ^^ that punch has no effect since being parapalegic has noting to do with ya hands since they still have movement ..... weak punch.... You couldnt spit~ "Sik"~~ if you had "Chlamidia" On your Lips ^^ thats so played and un-original...... i could go on about ya verse but i'll leave it at that.... upp'in this battle N enough talking shit bitch.... i figuer i aint need much agenist someone so lame who use played punches..... |
This was feedback posted for Trooper
nice verses all around
structure:ie flow:ie vocab:troop punches:ie persies:troop ie took this one, because his flowed better. Troop was over on ie on vocab, i liked his punches, but he just had problems in flow and rhyming, on the last two lines, those don't rhyme. ie's closer was nice, the beginning was stretched. but close battle though |
^^^ come on man u dont need to drop feed-back just drop a vote.......
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that was ya only chance 4 a vote lol Maku u sux anyway Nextt |
^^^^ how i suck when ua int got no vote or feed back???
dont try to sway votes clown...... u trying to make a joke outta something u'r not to sure about so hold u'r head hommie...... upp'in for more votes... |
Voted For: Trooper
WOW!!! I havent seen a battle this good in a long time, word up. Godd fuckin flow. Ya'll on each others level, thats wut i like. I gave my vote to trooper only because he was hard from start to finish. I.E. had a hard flow also, but you started out wack, and that was the only reason i couldnt give it to you. I seen mad punches and personals in this battle, but i think Trooper had more personals. Elevate though. Drop votes on the below battles people |
Voted For: Trooper
One Sided Battle Multi's- Trooper Punchers - Tooper Personal - n/a Enjoyment - Trooper overall Trooper Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
u'r 20-1 but u'r chances of wining its plenty to none when faceing da best
spit that fire that'll burn ya face like ya avator cuz im the nightmare in text ^^ that was a personal automatic.... and he switch hes avator to make the diss weaker CLOWN...... what kids would do to win a battle online..... hahaha.... |
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