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BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-17-04 12:59 AM

post feed back no name yet for the song
 
My rhymes are customized to take you any day I aint afraid/
So Stop I out raped you man everyones sayin you got out played/.
My rap is like me burnin you down with hot flames/
My punchlines hit you with lots of power just like I was lebron james/.
I hate how when I battle people they like to play games/
When they cant even produce there own fuckin names/.
Most of the time people say there gonna pull out there nine/
Now that’s a wannabe that will never grow up to shine/.

some one is featuring in this song thats why its not long

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-17-04 02:05 AM

U P P I N

Guranteed 08-17-04 02:36 AM

yo, wanna do a cloab, not the mixtext shit but a colab called "Guns Blazin" Part 1

nice little freestyle had some good lines

Mad Dog 08-17-04 03:47 AM

It's a bit too short for me in my opinion to be a eyecatching open mic...never the less i feel ya came aight in this the structure werent fucked and flowed well...jus try and increase ya wordplay dawg...keep it goin :thumbup:

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-17-04 09:58 AM

thanks but guranteed i cant do battles

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-17-04 10:00 AM

no man im not a wannabe i can rap about guns lol im not a gangsta im a big 14 year old that dont put up with bitch natives

Acuity 08-17-04 10:50 AM

tight
 
yo if dis went on it wud've been ill, in terms lyrics it was tight, it wud b gud to hear how u spit cos dis rhyme sound sick spitten slow or fast. i wanna c unuva post form u dog. Peace

Elusiv G ( lyrical masterminz n real skillz)

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-17-04 02:27 PM

lol what^^ i didnt understand you and i made that song to bad boy this bad boy that and thats not even a goos ogn guy that was shit i made lol but ya chekc out my work is good

yOuNG tIPS 08-17-04 02:30 PM

dawg you needa keep your shit going on and spit longer

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-17-04 02:51 PM

i told you that someone is in the song alright and there piece also 10 lines ok thats why it aint long plus the only part i like is this part>
My rap is like me burnin you down with hot flames/
My punchlines hit you with lots of power just like I was lebron james/.
sense peopel liked it ill make it longer prob and my other song to and make the song mine ya ill make it longer but ya its ok i geuss not my best lol mad dog thanks man


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