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willnova vs ..::Sinister::..
Battle Rules:
20 lines max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 1 hour to spit topic: You Suddenly Have Feelings for your best friend Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-17-04 at 01:30 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
WillNova has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 01:02 AM.
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..::Sinister::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 01:02 AM.
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topic: You Suddenly Have Feelings for your best friend
Look at her blue beautiful eyes, its one of a kind... I can't control it anymore I just can't hold it inside... she won't feel the same so mah feelins i can't show it... If she knows, theres no more friends so i can't expose it... Don't u jst hate that feeling knowing that shes taken... N hearin her talk about the guys that she's been datin... i keep explain'n 2 my self 2 give up cuz theres no chance.. She's ur friend, would u wanna loose her jst 4 romance... Everyday it seems to get harder because of temptations... Everyday it hurts even worst wen u help wit her relations... Wen all you wanna do is ruin it so you could jst have her.. You'll do anything for her luv, i'll do nething it dont matter... Wen her words came out "im in luv" my heart jst shatters... You pretend to be happy 4 her wen inside my tears scatters... Wit her i shared from a fake happy moment to fake smiles.. Rode wit her while hearin bout her b/f for straight 8 miles.. I can't take it nemore, i guess imma jst struggle for a while... But atleast wen i need her i got her #1 on mah speed dial... Well for now I guess im really jst going to have no choice.. But to let my heart get hurt and later on jst get destroyed... [True Story] ^^^^^^^^^ |
ole gurl from highschool, rode and smoked cronic//
yung and hook on phonics, the relationship plautonic// I grew in the projects, she fresh from the burbs// me and her sounded aubsurd, stuck smokin the herbs// started to notice the curves, the way her body bends// but then again, I don't keep ugly bitches as friends// night 'bout to end, the crew chillin at the movies// sumthing moved me, arm around her, she closer to me// her body soothed me, her head on the shoulder// had to kiss and hold her, do like a pimp suppose ta// cup of folgers, wake up call, sumthing I jus accepted// next thing I kno we in her bed sweaty and half naked// unexpected, but we both fell in the moment// she feelin me fo real, I jus wanted to bone it// so I'm stuck wit no motive, couldn't break it up then// she too close of a friend, stuck again, luv fo pretend// hahahaha.... tru story folks, and this jus happened |
yo, nice drop nigga... I was feelin that, it was deep as fuck.... but if I was u slowly but surely I would tell ma how I felt..... stay friends, but if she feelin u and homeboy fall off, u straight.... if not, then at least u'll kno, kna mean
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Voted For: ..::Sinister::..
Not very SINISTER of a drop, but u get my vote u had better structure and flowed better. kinda close "battle", but u won. Holla! |
thanx will uppin
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This was feedback posted for ..::Sinister::..
cant vote but damn that was good. DAMN that was good....
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How u can't vote bu they put ya vote up there anyway..... hahahahahaha, we whillin now boi, aight uppin
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This was feedback posted for ..::Sinister::..
just felt the topic and the feelin he put in writin his whole verse... so yea vote sinister.
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Voted For: ..::Sinister::..
ok: sinister~ i was feelin your verse more because of your descriptive words and flow, i liked the way you started this off and ended this too, nice job overall willnova~your verse wasnt as powerful or imaginative as sinister''s verse, but it wasnt bad, it was decent, i liked sinisters approach more and his words, good job both Vote:sinister Drop a vote peeps!!! |
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