¥D's Money¥ vs SLicK~SKiLLz
 

Battle Rules:

5-15 lines
No Crew Votes,hate,dr
No Recycling
No Biting,feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-17-04 at 01:45 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

SLicK~SKiLLz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 01:16 AM.

¥D's Money¥ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 01:17 AM.

Well you call yo self slick skillz
well i got a slick dick
and i stuck it in yo momma, yo granny, and yo sis
well since i busted in yo momma i guess that would make me yo daddy
i'll pimp yo momma round in a all black caddy
my skillz are unlimited just like my sperm count
and when i win dis battle they gonna put me on a fountain

ds money u should be on comedey central cause ur funny
for accepting my call out ima take this win like the game mike tyson punch out
i vsing waste of ~time~'rs got u standing wordless like a bunch of ~mime~'rs
why dont all u lossing mcs make a crew called the ~whine~"rs
ur lucky i deleted my 1rst ~spit~ because u was about to get ~hit~ hard like a ~trick~ and im the ~pimp~
got u walkin with a ~limp~ givin u a tase of what i am
im like a spitting bomb ~tick-tick-tick~ just take this loss like a ~man~
my flows fly better then an 8 ~wing~ed ~fan~
i flow way better then rubben studdered can ~sing~
my flows are puttin ur fat ass in a ~combma~
got u in check like that little boy ~drumma~
and dont go and be ~laime~ and makin dealz on ~aim~
on rv.com u gotta earn ur ~faime~

srry y0 3rd line should start with i hate vsing not i vsing sorry y0 but gl member the rules

ok UPPIN FOR VOTES DROP AN HONEST VOTE Y0 LETS GO DROPEM DROPEM DROPEM MAKE A VOTE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

yo verse was like a curse of a fuckin 5 year old
i don't know slick how yo momma let you get on da net
u ain't even worthy of shinin my rolex
i don't even know why u talkin bout da lil boy drumma
i hope u fuck around and get hit bye a humma
you about to take dis fall lil mike tyson did
once again i say u just a fuckin lil kid

lets see them votes in herr peopl start votin be honest

Voted For: ¥D's Money¥

flow was good punchlines were good personals not so hot but still got the edge on slick

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Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

This was a close battle but Im gon to have to give it to
SLicK~SKiLLz because he came harder
his punchlines were better and overall flow
The other dude didnt have a bad drop though he just came harder

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

slick skillz takes this battle by a long shot his flow was longer, made more sense, n punche shit alot harder
structure could b tweaked a lil but otha than that this battle was a wrap
YD"s flow was pretty basic he needs to elevate on his vocab, structure , and rhymes in general
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Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

SLicK~SKiLLz won dis battle fo sho doe his word play wuz better den ur oppent ¥D's Money¥ money u just had a short versus,so i voted SLicK~SKiLLz for dis battle both did good

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

Uhhh, Not The Greatest Battle In The World...
Money, Dogg What Happend? ....Ya Rhymin Was A Lil Off When You Wrote This Huh? ...Better Luck Nextime Homeboy An USE BETTER PUNCHES, An Add Humour iN Ya Rhymes, But GOOD LOOKIN My Nigguh

Slick, Ya KILLED IT....You Had Better Punches, Your USAGE Of Words Were Better An The Structure Was Nice

Skills 6/10
Money 5/10

Keep The Rhymes Comin My Nigguhz!

An Yo RETURN THE FAVOR N VOTE ON MY BATTLES

Peace
!!1!!

This was feedback posted for ¥D's Money¥
 

haha omg. that is hilarious. no not becuz it wuz good wit punchlines, cuz it sucked. slick u won this easily, YD u r, just my god, wuts the right word? horrible? no worse. everything goes to slick. YD your punches were like 2nd grader girls punches. y would they put u on a fountain? "i vsing waste of ~time~'rs got u standing wordless like a bunch of ~mime~'rs
why dont all u lossing mcs make a crew called the ~whine~"rs" haha thats ok. peace