Its about time!!!!!!
 

yo its about time to welcome the nigga thats ill
look btches and niggas this aint a fuckin drill
watch me walk in here wit all the bling bling
when really all i want to do is party and sing
yo bitches come to me cuz i aint got on a ring
bitch back it up and shake that fuckin thing
bring the beat up when i'm on the floor
dance floor get ready for some more
when i'm in the mutha fuckin club stay away
tell this to your friends nigga i dont play
me and mariah carey gonna do it large
betta be careful who's house you try to barge
nigga (echoe's)

chorus x1
yo its about time to get naughty
yo its abut time to get snaughty
its about time to get hectic
its about time to get ignorant
its about time to get in the mutha fuckin club

yo theres gopnna be a remix to it wit illusion dont say this i'm gonaa take my big bros legacy yeah i'm talkin bout Ruff Tuff Thug

Its aight a nice structure kinda basic but readin that sounds club banger style...keep it up u'll get better at ur whole style and stuff by focusing on this forum it helps when writing verses...nice

thanx man i'm the ruff and tuff side of ruff tuff thug did you kno he my big bro

cool my lil sis rolls on RV too

yeah who is she

yo view this

alrite stuff

pretty basic could have been much better.

i thought it was O.K you could of done a whole lot better

taht was shit like everybody else who posted here

it was koo i wasn't really feelin it
dfat much but i see where ur cumin
from check mines out see if u like em
WE RUNNIN DISS RAP SHIT
QUIT BANGIN IF U AINT A GANSTA

Where is the creativity, Hon? To be totally honest, if you took out "niggas" and "bit#ches", you lose atleast 1/2 of your rhyme. Think about it.

Hopefully you don't think I'm trying to diss you.. I am just trying to help you to grow and bring out the best (which is alread inside of you) that you have to offer as an artist.

yo man i wasnt feelin it niether so i agree i'll do much betta next time...

good shit man keep droppin.