YuNg_GuN vs !Mc Merc!
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

you spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-17-04 at 01:36 PM

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YuNg_GuN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 01:07 PM.

!Mc Merc! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 01:14 PM.

yo mc merc your rhymes dont even fuckin work
fuck around wit me and die your gonna get merced
hey look at this pussy not gettin wins and peeps
you will neva get wut you fuckin want or seeks
i'm new and i'm already meetin my fuckin needs
you aint gonna win face it you suck too much
you aint good at rappin and writing fighting and such
you'll neva be good and you'll neva get a bitch to fuck
silent prophecy aint shit bitch LMM is a winnin
in the fuckin ring its you that i'll fuckin be pinnin
i'll strike you like lightnin and a sweep you like waves
you fuckin suck at writing and you wont get saves
yo this mutha fuckin event for you is a no win
i do wut i do cuz you aint shit i'll do it again
mutha fucka put down the mutha fuckin pin
for you and your gay skillz is the fuckin end

you and your punk ass brotha polluting rapverse
everytime playas read ya ryhmes, they stomach hurts
you aint got skill you about to see, you like just britney
couldn't take the loser image, so you became a fake g
i aint hear to rip ya ,just teach ya a lesson, u suck
that why evertime people read ya shit they like wut tha fuk
you a lyrical misfit, you coundnt ryhme good for shit
but you could ryhme good as ya brotha, ya when in a hissy fit
you all really suck, so tell me why the fuck, i accpeted
just to show you that u no good, you should be selfrejected
i was trying to help ya brotha, i aint interfering with ya lova
to show him he cant be a g and have skill, he needs a motha
you all think your thugs,do you know life in the ghetto
your just from the burbs, saying fuck white kids n heavymetal
ghetto full of all, not just black but everybody, they an all
you a fucking fake, cause nigga ya could never win this brawl
i could diss you on and on, but i was wastin time all along
i could have beat you without a fucking ryhme scheme at all

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

mc merc
personals yung gun
punches both
structure both
flow yung gun
multis mc merc
vocab mc merc
wprdplay mc merc
overall mc merc

uppin

uppin

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

close battle

Yung GuN: nice structure
nice flow
but rhymes was too simple and elementary
ok personals

mc merc: nice punches
ok flow but not better then Yung's
structure ok
rhymes wasn't simple at all

winner/ Mc merc

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143508

plz for god's sake will someone return the favor?????????
no one ever does

i will

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

nice battle...........................................

oops, i didn't mean to vote for him, take that off, it was meant for feed back..

This was feedback posted for !Mc Merc!
 

my vote goes to MC Merc and here r my reasons. better personals, lotta punches that connected, and good rhymin. (you aint got skill you about to see, you like just britney
couldn't take the loser image, so you became a fake g) haha.
yung gun yours wuz ok, but your cussin through off your flow. (yo mc merc your rhymes dont even fuckin work
fuck around wit me and die your gonna get merced) swing and miss. MC merc in the end

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

MC Merc ... I think mc got this cuz his flow was better ... he had some alright multis.... i liked his wordplay.... ha had better punches, and i think i was some good mettas in there!

Yung gun... MC got this cuz you had no multis... a couple good punches and not alot of wordplay!

V/ !Mc Merc!

PLease return tha fava !!