$865candyman865$ vs Unexpected
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Unexpected has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 02:30 PM.

$865candyman865$ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 02:33 PM.

unexpected I got somthin fo ya ass to expect
you can expect to lose this battle and its done its set
on how could you let me win this battle
its like you on the ocean wit no paddle
now while me and my homies are out gettin hi
you out on the street fillin yo ass to get fryed
now i get my
wit cha ma
didnt mean to make ya cry
but i dont give a fuck
i just sit back and sy
now wit my million dolla deal
i be kikn it wit young buck
ya dumb fuck
dont you know you have no luck
so just give up and go home
homie this is my game its seems like im alone
but wit this crome
its destin to go upside ya dome

Candyman, candyman, candyman/
Yeah ill say it three times man you know i aint scared/
I step to the frontlines after you already been bitchslapped/
Now dont come with those lines talkin about you gonna clap back/
Cause ill turn you into an 'L' shape while pee wee herman turns out your back-end/
Now im new to the board but im back-in the game/
Here to use my lyrics to stimulate your brain/
Your lines are like gettin numbed at the dentist/
Tell me dog who the f*ck is feelin it/
Not me or your girl, so stick to your right-hand/
Now on the other-hand im ribbed for her pleasure/
Ready to battle the whole world/
On the mic or in text it really dont matter/
Been doin' it so long they call me a vet-e-r(eal)(m)an/

Uppin for some votes on my first battle, I left feedback on a couple.

Can we get some votes here? Uppin for at least one vote ..

No votes yet i gave like 10 replies on battles and i cant get 1

Voted For: Unexpected

UNEXPECTED WIN DIS// HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW AND PERSONALS

CANDYMAN U AINT THREW AN PUNCH AND IF U DID DIDNT HIT HARD// WORK ON YO PUNCHES AND YO FLOW//

This was feedback posted for Unexpected
 

yall both need to elevate like fuck. check out the tutorials. :thumbup:

Voted For: Unexpected

ya flow was nice ryhmes was iight n ya punchlines were pretty tight
vote=unexpected

Voted For: Unexpected

altho the struc. of yo flow was super wack, i still think you took this one wit more creativitie and harder punches...candyman, lost because of his struc. i think. at least make a whole bar before you change lines...the last line you tried to hard on(unexpected), i think. you tried to have it hit hard, but i think it failed, but the rest of the flow was on point to me...this was a one-sided battle. elevate yourself


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Voted For: Unexpected

You guys both werent that good.... ...ok you both sucked.....

You bath had horrible structure... barley any punches... flow was "BAD" ...I hafta votefor Unexpected... for beter flow


"WOW".....

Return tha fava~

This was feedback posted for $865candyman865$
 

cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here!

Voted For: Unexpected

I think that Unexpected got this battle because i feel that Unexpected came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Unexpected got it they were used effectifely and were on point $865candyman865$ u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Unexpected good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Unexpected and flow and structure i'll give to Unexpected .

V/Unexpected There's my link be sure to return the favour honestly