System Crasher vs SexyChick1338
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6 - 12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Dontmatter who goes first!!! :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-20-04 at 05:22 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
System Crasher has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 05:23 PM.
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So sexy chick wanna hear a bit of my shit?...
Well sit back and relax, You aint gonna like it, So im battlin a girl?...im bout ta' hurl, You should keep your toes straight... dont let them curl, My lyrics deserve a whole lot better than you!, They will make you cry, that what they do~! Most girls that rap arent really Emcee's, Usually they are bitch wannaBe's, I'v had enough of dissin this hoe, Girl I won the battle, Fix your camel toe! Crasher~~~~ |
SexyChick1338 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 06:52 PM.
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Aiight here is my shit! This is my first battle ta let ya know!!
Man ya want to go up against me I'm the baddest bitch there can be/ 1 Ya gotta be fuckin crazy to do this shit When ya lose and I win don't have a fit/ 2 I'll make ya look like a pussy in front of everyone I'll make ya look so much like a pussy people will be callin you hun instead of mon (man)/ 3 Ya better jsut quit now Before ya know it ya'll be infront of my givin me a bow/ 4 Ya say ya raps are ill Well mine can kill/ 5 My rhymes are the fattest It's wack if i'm not the baddest/ 6 I suggest ya call a doctor Because when ya lose you are gonna need some one to us a shocker/ 7 Calm down there nuttin to complain about Bitch just shut ya fuckin mouth/ 8 |
If that was your first batle you didnt do bad... that was good for your first.... but one thing.... you shouldnt talk so much bhout your self.... you should stay more on tyhe subject of dissin me.... but its all good... :thumbup:
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Aiight man thanks for the tip! The only way ya can go from here is up! I am goin on vacation I'll be written otha shit!
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This was feedback posted for System Crasher
sexy i hope you is sexy cuz that sucked no good punches or disses at all really bad fo real a streched flow and stucture but not the worst by far ok verse a 3/10
system whacked all around no flow or disses and punches were even weaker then sexys if you wanna learn how to battle hit my link and read one of my verses1/10 |
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I nkow.... I sucked... I think that had to be my worst verse ever.. I guess I was in a hurry... Uppin..
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Voted For: System Crasher
this was a wack battle, yall on each others level but need to elevate big time...yall's rhymes was beyond simple, dr.suess got more flows than yall. but i would give this up to system crasher cause his flow was less simpler than sexychick...and he had more personals, weak, but more...go elevate...yall too simple... drop votes on the below battles |
Thanx J dot... will return tha fava dawg!!
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Voted For: SexyChick1338
lots of punchlines................................... |
Nice feedback... lol ......................
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Voted For: System Crasher
my vote goes to crasher..even though i don't agree with what he said about Femcees. But itz all good i just think he's had more expercents (probbly more loses then wins) and had a couple more harder punchlines. |
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