RapVerse.com Community - not a problem by ProVerse****i'm 2mD on original, so this isnt biting

i didnt get no feedback on orignal
so im posting the open mic here
tell me what yaw'll think :thumbup:

not my problem, by: ProVerse

all of us have seen em'

have you seen me posted on the wal-mart exits
you have a brief moment of sadness but it quickly passes
it isn't your problem u say, so you jus exhale
break-away from it and move on with your day
but, for the parents, that i can't say
while we're complaining about battles
those families at home they stay,
knees clinched by there bed as they pray
but its a sad thought, but yet so ovious,and its hurtin
she's been gone for 2 years, odds are she's not returnin
you know n your heart, she's not showin
but whats worse then that
is she being in danger and u not knowin

they suffer, but its not our problem....
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(chorus)
ignore the screams
its probably kids playin
but as the world seems
its probably a kid layin
if it is, nothin of concern
its not your family dude
so why should you have to move....

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my pops was another story, another source
everytime he'd hear yellin he rushes to the porch
but he soon collapsed and quit tryin to help
the sad truth of his cousins being stabbed
and his mind spinin thinkin of the pain that they felt
police say there was many witneses
and one videotaped the murder on cam
and yet no one even the camerman lent a hand
i guess it wasn't there problem, they only think of bills
both dollar and eletric both got a grib on human wills
but your thoughts change when u see how the pain conects
because the 3rd and final verse explains the chain effect....

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(chorus)
ignore the screams
its probably kids playin
but as the world seems
its probably a kid layin
if it is, nothin of concern
its not your family dude
so why should you have to move....

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1st
a rape and kill happens
then
the rape game becomes rapid
and
you know the police lackin,lackin in caring
only
care of if weed is being bearing
next
a not-so-known family member is a victom
so
now your eyes are open to listen
still
not really alert to the magnitude of the situation
following
that its your daughter, she's now missin for years
since
2003 you been waiting by the phone drenched with tears
start
making notices and posting around town being smart
finally
you realize it's that its on the floor
next to the same
girl you tossed out on the wall of wal-mart.....

pleaaaase gime some feedback!!!!!

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