Murder
Man walks up to u in a club says a brer's talkin shit bout u ( u say who) (dat brer over dere filling his cup) u walk over like man, wassup he disses u,ur fam and ur crew now he's insulted u and u look a fool cos he dun dissed u in front of yo homies, so what u gonna do ****************************************** ur mans look @ u like step up black so u go outside and key up his cadillac dem grroves be inches deep gon cost dat nigga 5 g's at least he steps out crunk'd as fuck from a night when Elusiv G dun ripped da club and he sees his ride and feels the dagger slicin' through his pride bitches on the side, laughin' like its a joke manz screamin ( if it was me dat nigga b smok'd) ****************************************** Goes to his contact to buy sum heat He's weary of the popo so hes on the creep goes to his hoes, deliperates on the predicament his niggaz phone saying lets 4get any agreement so dey roll up in a lincoln navigator roll by da niggaz house ( nigga com get a taster) brer stepz outside with his homies at his bak nigga no.1 dus nuttin but spray from his gat dats how da streetz fall further best believ its murder |
nice flow and structure yo view my shit i need you so badly
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yo wasup y'all dis ma rhyme murder. I listened to Nas: Rewind where he spits a story backwards. I wanted to do same sort of thing but spittin backwards is another level so i jus rhymed about a murder from beginning to end. holla Bak
Check my battles: Elusiv G vs. Invader_ZIM Elusiv G vs. Hova-Wayne Elusiv G vs. SLik Skillz Elusiv G vs. Mc Merc |
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Shitty, come harder man, and to much miscellaneous ish in there, you got a win cause I aint show up, you aint beat me bitch nevh that........If you think you can, reset the battle.
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it was str8, good flow
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good shit
dat shit is pretty tight jus throw a couple of more punches in dere and you'll be set
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thanks 4 da feedback and Hova-Wayne yeh i got da win cos u bitched out n didnt show up so suck a dick and kiss ma blak ass nxt time u online set up a battle and ill fully rectify any thoughts u hav of beatin me!
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Blast a town with brassbound regulations, devastation
On streets interrupt celebrations with heat, destination Twilight zone, got a stopper in the sink made of copper And zinc water can’t escape drown and slaughter fakes proper Make doctors see straight, rate this above average I’m a thug Savage, love marriage and like Biggy my grub’s cabbage then the club In the tub with shorty using Zest soap, best hope for sex Dope Lex parked, quotes text that spark this girl wanna stroke complex “Girl Gyration from booty is not a violation of duty, it’s just Vibration from a cutie like you” “true MADD I’m too glad must We talk? I’m brittle a little you wanna finger fiddle my pie crust Guy must lick the gravy of this slick lady before the cock is thrust” |
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