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TURBAN 08-18-04 01:48 PM

jus a messed up relationship
 
we had the mental connection
a mutual attraction,
call it a interconnection
quest for perfection
left me looking at your reflection
partially we got involved , held hands and what not
got to the room and showed u some affection
if i do remember straight , i sensed u wasnt doin ur part [my detection]
we took a sudden change of direction
left me with half an erection [damn ha but o well]
you ditched but i split before i could end it
then i came back-[ turned around my opinions]
you said it i say your still soft spoken
had to get your point across quick
you needed me and shit, i still was gonna leave
but u kept me there,thought of some gimmick
told me "thick and thin we'll stay together"
i guess those thoughts kept me there
but my intention to get out remained
hard to explain , we had it- all
summer changed to fall
and if i recall , you went astray

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-18-04 01:49 PM

um man i could understand the story and yer technique was off i couldent see where you had rhymes did you even have any? honest not playin 2/10

TURBAN 08-18-04 02:47 PM

ight ight its kool

burn stunna 08-18-04 07:12 PM

i like the begining part n how it went 2gether, not to sure bout the rest but it w as alright


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