$865candyman865$ vs e-dubz
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-18-04 at 06:01 PM

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$865candyman865$ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 05:32 PM.

e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 05:33 PM.

this nigga slippin in spittin....... so he’s relyin on spittin his writtins
but the truth is, he couldnt drop ‘shit’ if he mixed ‘exlax’ wit ritlin
with the shit I ‘carrey’ i'll hawk yo ‘mask’ off and leave yo brain ‘smokin’
my name’s spokin while im out tokin the nine which’ll leave yo frame broken
dubz coming at yo hot and quick like an expresso outta star bucks
so when im done, u'll be left smokin at the tip like disposed cigar butts
this aint sweet like ‘candy man’, my flow is ‘hot’ but it aint ‘sandy’ man*
he bout to get merked and left broken so bad he need a handyman
i run wit the toast......... so use caution if you think to approach me
or ima have you layin in plastic bags......... like path-mark groceries

*hot=desert desert=sandy..

e-dubz,be kikin yo ass wit ma lugz//
me and my homies we is at the topof the pack meanin we thugz//
we aint teddy bears son there will bee no hugz//
i get ridd of wa wanna be gangsters wit the back of ma hand
// homie you betta not get up from you knees and stand// or else i swat you like a fly// to bad you aint gettin no action you like the guy offa american pie// mutherfucker betta not give me no lip// or else I have to start jigglin ma ziipa// i should write abook tellin ya how to get rid of bitch assniggas

uppin

Voted For: e-dubz

got my vote, but both was a little off tho, E u need 2 work on ur structure alil cause u shitz a little hard 2 follow, punches was aight but improvement wouldn't hurt, not a lovely opener, but ur close was kinda tight tho,
and Candys shit was just plain poorly arranged and almost didn't even rhyme, but end result... u won this 1
-1- vote on some of mine so I can close them shitz out... AIGHT?!?!?!?!?!?! holla

Voted For: e-dubz

e-dub got it. had hard punches and the flow was on point. He attacted candy more while candy was just rambling in some parts of his verse.

Ay, check my battles. They in my siggy. Despersate for votes now.

Voted For: e-dubz

e-dubz wins this battle with his multies even tho they were kind of annoying to read. they were ight he could have had some better punches, thats what wins battles for me
but he still took it cuz candyman's whole verse was pretty basic
holla at me
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iight..uppin

Voted For: e-dubz

aight...e-dubz got this one..he had harder punches..the structure was ok & same wit the flow..the wordplay & vocab was nice...856..yo verse wasnt all-that..u had a couple of punches in there...fix yo structure..and the flow was a little ok..but e-dubz took this one...

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uppin this shit..

Voted For: e-dubz

e dub your punches could be better but your disses were ok you shined hard on wordplay and flow was crazy a 10/10 overall your verse is a 6/10 good shit
865 no vocab or wordplay flow and strture was strecghed no good punches or disses he murdered you easy you need to elevate 2/10