LoOpY -Tell me what y'all think-
 

This is just some random shit


I gots a mental migraine, severe pain in me brain/
Energy drained, like coming down real hard off cocaine/
Pressure buildin' up gonna bust a main vein, gotta maintain/
Before I put the Glock to my dome and create a huge stain/
BANG BANG BANG, get a grip, need air, so I jump in my 'stang/
Jam to some Bone Thugs, Creepin' on ah come up and Down for my thang/
Spark a philly, inhale deep, aha, you know how I hang/
Throw in some Wu, but back out, not really down with their new slang/
Big Daddy Kane, The O.G./ puts all this new shit to shame/
Faggot new style emcee's, washed up bling bling be so fuckin' lame/
Compare 50Cent to NWA, not the same,in fact the former sounds really tame/
Sit back down up and comers and take a few notes on the game/
Remember when rappers did it for the love and not for the fame?/
Now we got emcee's countin' down their shows so they can buy that Leer Jet private plane/
I just realized it ain't me, I no longer lust to maim/
Its rappers tryin' to make a false name, all about the dames and the gain/
So y'all betta be straight with the songs that you sang/
Comin' after yo ass Phunky D the lyrically insane/

Come on, no critisizm or anything?

dope man you need some battles a record to build up is what you need your good man 6/10