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Twizted Ayngel 08-18-04 09:00 PM

Aborted ChiLd.
 
Little child, you'll never smile, wont have a life to make worthwhile, Your mom is wild, couldn't handle the piled up stress of bein fertile, No funds, or a house to live in, Could it be? A better place in heaven then what you woulda lived in, things you wouldn't want to see, its pain to me cause its a shame to see someone die without a fighting chance at life, never see night, or be given the time of day, she'll pay in the long run, after its all done, she'll miss you forever, but know that it was for the better, she knew it wasnt the life for you, couldn't handle havin to fight for two, couldn't fight for herself - let alone you.

Twizted Ayngel 08-18-04 10:29 PM

& if you leave links, or names to pieces - i'll leave some feedback in return - as long as you drop good feed.

TURBAN 08-18-04 11:38 PM

feel'n that big girl, i liked the rhyme play you captured the topic with every word, what i think you made the best was that she couldnt handle herself or having a child , i dont agree with abortion , but you know woman has the right to choose , its a tough subject , murder each way , both ppl lose ya know? but its a good topic , you a good writer any more stuff i can peep? hit me back

check out , "i'm a terrorist" "to face the lord" and "mr.president"

Twizted Ayngel 08-19-04 01:35 AM

Thanks... more feed, please?

TURBAN 08-19-04 01:51 AM

hey u know what pingry(nj) or greenwich academy (ct)is ? i have friends that go to those schools

Twizted Ayngel 08-20-04 11:07 AM

yeah

some more feed would be nice.. it aint a long piece, iont see why nobodys resondin.

WillNova 08-21-04 03:27 AM

yoyoyoyoy, nice drop.... definitely feelin that. that was deep and I felt u on this on. Keep u the good writings, spit wit ya soul write wit ur brain


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