ProVerse vs Sonofisis#1
 

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Check in by: 08-21-04 at 10:42 PM

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Sonofisis#1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 10:43 PM.

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 10:43 PM.

You're Still a Boy, I'll Stab yo Voice Box, make u Kill The Noise
U're a dummy! This fools avatar says that his "CITY" is Illinoise
Wow, you're Steady Slippin while i'm ahead, Heavy Pimpin
I can tell that u're just a bitch, "Foolish" like Eddie Griffin
There's no way that you can win, You just don't Got The Soul
I'll burn you so bad that people will tell u to Stop, Drop, & Roll
You have no Power, I'll Devour You Each Round
And any other bullshit MC who needs 24 Hours to Freestyle!
Yo whack ass never stood chance nigga, so just Let It Be
Only time i'll read somethin u wrote, is if it was a Check To Me
My skills pay the bills and will soon pay for a V12 Range
If u were ever ill then u sure "fell off track", like derailed Trains
& when yo ass see me comin then you Best Find Protection
Coz like Ice Cube I Stay wit a Mac 10 & West Side Connection

the "fall" of rap, was spawned August the present year
blinded the peuples of the voters, with words, jerked tears
"winded" by "punches", punchlines not familiar with fisis
investors with you, stocks fail, so they closin the business
bruised mentally,mind on permenant writers block
infested with false confidense,so losses give you quite a shock
imitates gamecube disc, "small" time rhymes easy to "lose"
figured you elevated, so you "fell" and "phyics" been proved
one win instantly boost you, like a slim fast blended shake
used too battlin herbs(codee) so battlin me have you phased
vending for a "ghost"writer,still i "see through" your act
i notice a name change, loss of records so now u want it back
i questioned the "theory of reletivity" of rap and you,lesson is
comparin you, with talent its ovious the test came negative


ok that's my verse, hope yaw liked it :)

k uppin for votes!!!

i will return the favor if a link is left

yea, uppin this..

Voted For: ProVerse

good wordplay and vocab as well as flow nice punches and disses and a good overall verse 6/10
son i aint get the second line what does his city have to do with anything 2nd bar was whacked as well as the thrid good check punch ok flow kinda streched overall you aint hit hard with your punches and disses 4/10

Voted For: Sonofisis#1

I think Sonofsis took this one. Harder punches in his. More towards Proverse. Pros sounded kinda prewritten and didnt have many personals in the verse. Wasnt feelin it. Didnt sound like a battle verse really. Punches were off. Flow and structure was nice though. Flowed really well. Imma have ta give it ta sonofsis though, for harder punches and better personals.

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You're a dumb ass eempire, he said that illinois is a city, you don't find that to be a diss, it is stupid, illinois is a fuckin state.. I shouldn't of had to explain that..

Voted For: ProVerse

this wuz uh close battle but proverse came harder with his personals..at tha begining it wuz just alright but when tha 2 bars with false confidense an tha 1 right after it came up it got way better an thats where he took it..it got better till tha end

v/p
return tha fav on 1 of ma battles plz

ohh ok now i get it but i still think overall he had a better verse and won my opion stays the same

my city, illinois

i didnt say it was a state i said "my city" is a city dumbass :laugh:

uppin again

i promise to return the favor!!!!!!!!!!!!!! promise

Voted For: ProVerse

You're Still a Boy, I'll Stab yo Voice Box, make u Kill The Noise
U're a dummy! This fools avatar says that his "CITY" is Illinoise
(that was very gay, no punch) 0/5

Wow, you're Steady Slippin while i'm ahead, Heavy Pimpin
I can tell that u're just a bitch, "Foolish" like Eddie Griffin
(not quite ripe 2/5


There's no way that you can win, You just don't Got The Soul
I'll burn you so bad that people will tell u to Stop, Drop, & Roll
ok3/5

You have no Power, I'll Devour You Each Round
And any other bullshit MC who needs 24 Hours to Freestyle!
(wtf, bad rshcme, no punch 0/5, u dissed youself

Yo whack ass never stood chance nigga, so just Let It Be
Only time i'll read somethin u wrote, is if it was a Check To Me
(crappy..............0/5


My skills pay the bills and will soon pay for a V12 Range
If u were ever ill then u sure "fell off track", like derailed Trains
(ok first line gay, second is like a 3

& when yo ass see me comin then you Best Find Protection
Coz like Ice Cube I Stay wit a Mac 10 & West Side Connection
GAY as fuck -100/5

you have good flow though and structure,...

the "fall" of rap, was spawned August the present year
blinded the peuples of the voters, with words, jerked tears
no punch )0/5, good bar tho

"winded" by "punches", punchlines not familiar with fisis
investors with you, stocks fail, so they closin the business
ORIGINAL 4.5/5

bruised mentally,mind on permenant writers block
infested with false confidense,so losses give you quite a shock

4.5/5 godd

the winner here........

imitates gamecube disc, "small" time rhymes easy to "lose"
figured you elevated, so you "fell" and "phyics" been proved
5/5 yo nice punch nigga

one win instantly boost you, like a slim fast blended shake
used too battlin herbs(codee) so battlin me have you phased
5/5 uhuhhhhhhhhh

ending for a "ghost"writer,still i "see through" your act
i notice a name change, loss of records so now u want it back
3/5 down a notch good punch, but dint go with the rest

i questioned the "theory of reletivity" of rap and you,lesson is
comparin you, with talent its ovious the test came negative
4/5
good finicher,
the winner is obvious.

proverse 4

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.