RazorRudebwoy vs Poet
 

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Poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 09:00 AM.

RazorRudebwoy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 09:05 AM.

look as dis nigga poets av he couldnt even beat my rapper DawnCre/
idk when he hopped on mad dog nasty "tree"/
nigga i think u better to a docter i think u got a couple fleas/
you so ugly i fucked yo mama and made ehr talk chiniese.

word, im gonna come weak on this one just for fun..

battle this kid? shit, its mentally draining how borin he is.. id rather split my own wig..
got blunt 'razor' lickin my dick.. n 'boy'.. its 'rude' how i merk newbs that talk tough..
........but fuken act this bitch... im droppin factual disses on tricks that suck n d/r herbs..
im fuken merkin this nurse.. n whats worse... hes suckin donnald 'duck' n hangin off his bitch words..

aiight quick exp..
he rides sinners dick VERY HARD
hes boring
hes a fag...
donnald duck is what we call sinner cuz he ducks people so much...
sinners a herb (he D/R's him)

This was feedback posted for RazorRudebwoy
 

Razor what the fuck was that??? 1st line was shit as a mutha fucka which had no link to the 2nd line (which dissed me) therefore went off point! 3rd line blah big time and the punch on the closer how the fuck does that work?!? wack go and die u'll do rap a favour.

aiight now lets get some whores to vote............
drop links when ya voted

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Voted For: Poet

razor: uhh.... what the fuck? ....... first off, Poet aint black, so sayin nigga is weak as shit n makes ya look stupid. Your punches were random as shit and barely made sense. You know when vets fuck around in the cyphers n shit n spit a wack verse on purpose? Your verse was worse than that.

Poet: You could tell you were drunk by ya flow... lmao... but at least ya punches hit n were personal...

word... and dont hate on me razor, just cos I gave bad comments... its just an opinion... If you really feel raw about it ill battle you...

one, stay up both a ya

Voted For: Poet

I feel that Poets verses were a lot stronger and more effective than Razors because he had good vocab, hard punches, personals, and multies. Only thing I can suggest it fix the structer cause I personally didnt like it.

Razor came off kinda weak and I wasnt really feling his punches hitting hard. I hate those mama punches where you talk about banging them, cause its fake and aint never gunna happen...spit about either real or creative stuff, dont make shit up...

Please Return the favor with an honest vote/feed...

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yea i have a person to blame for that.. "SAND MAN" he challenged me this mornin.. shit i was sleepy it all good i jus i lost 1 battle.. and i need to elavate ESPCIALLY with my structures.. thanks for honest votes.

Voted For: Poet

look as dis nigga poets av he couldnt even beat my rapper DawnCre/
idk when he hopped on mad dog nasty "tree"/
4/10
nigga i think u better to a docter i think u got a couple fleas/
you so ugly i fucked yo mama and made ehr talk chiniese.
4/10

battle this kid? shit, its mentally draining how borin he is.. id rather split my own wig..
got blunt 'razor' lickin my dick.. n 'boy'.. its 'rude' how i merk newbs that talk tough..
........but fuken act this bitch..
6/10
. im droppin factual disses on tricks that suck n d/r herbs..
im fuken merkin this nurse.. n whats worse... hes suckin donnald 'duck' n hangin off his bitch words..
5/10

This battle was kinda weak but it came down 2 harder punches and better worpdlay
u both could elevate some and get ya vocab up and come with harder punches

Voted For: Poet

both were weak as fuck, but u had better flow tho not much else but I ain't hatin just givin my critique, nahmean!