Clock Work
 

check this shit somethin I put together off a dre beat.
http://www.chefhost.com/pat/music/ClockWork.mp3

feedbacK?

kept skippn, waz up wit that...i know yo song had emtion in it, but the beat was boring...speed that shit up...nice flow, but you tried to rhyme off of the beat, just put that shit in there, cause it made it sound wack...good shit tho

beat wuz iigh, deep, buh u should have had a lil mo emotion, flow wuz ok, off at times, voice iz iigh, lyricz are coo, keep it up 1

coo

right back to the top :)