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calm criminal 08-20-04 04:01 PM

Emotional Respect
 
Women have emotional feelings
that need to be respected.

Man, i wish
i would have known
what u was lacking.

i decided that emotional feelings is serious,
until i saw u crying.

Don't worry.
lets get som ice cream, I'm buying.
Man, why do u have to be so difficult?
Do you see that i'm trying?

Girl, you know i don't feel like fighting.
We'll, do u need some time to yo self?

You know that u don't have to take any shit
from someone else.

Everyday it feels like yo heart is compressed by
nails.

Now, I understand how u feel,
It makes u want to be excused
Before eating a meal.
Feels like yo heart is
locked
with a voodoo magic seal.

this can't be fo real,
so let's make a deal.

Stay home,
Take a bath... it's relaxing.

stop acting like yo life is ova
Like jefferson in a lesson before dying.

calm criminal 08-20-04 04:13 PM

rate my poem.
holla atcha boy!

fluidmoon 08-20-04 11:39 PM

emotional respect, you get, this was real, boi, you have a nice poem here, i liked it a lot, keep it up,i also liked the words you used to describe those feelings,.......good job


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