Wreckage vs Eyvon
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-23-04 at 04:02 PM

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Eyvon has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 04:02 PM.

ok, now motherfucker, say wut u wanna say/
act all prima donna but ima serve u gormet/
i aint no clown i aint here 2 entertain u/
ima rip ur heart out, drink ur blood, then chain u/
2 tha wall and rape u til ur guts squirt out blood/
til u hold ur breath, gut pops, 1 lung/
i aint no wangsta, just a hardcore gangsta/
that'll yank ya throat out with a chainsaw/
so if u think ur fuckin with an easy whore, better think again/
u just a sry little cunt, wut could u expect froma man?/
im tha most freespoken femcee, no1 could spit shit better/ u just a P.I.M.P, leave out the other letters/
so just hit me back, as if u could dis me/
ur rap styles warped and ur rhymes is all shitty/
tryin 2 defeat me is tha worst desision u could make/
cause i am Eyvon, the motherfuckin great!

Wreckage has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 01:46 PM.

*Picks up the Mic laughing*

~Dont come around here knowin'ya'whack, Let me nut on ya spine and label that as a "cum-back"~
~Everyone know's "daddys lil girl" is nut's, shes thirteen and has "d12", with a "PARENTAL ADVISORY" on'tha'front~
~Wanna know the funny-shit, she dropped my crew to join "CAPITOL PUNISHMENT"~ (weak ass niggas)
~Eyvon don't make me tell mommy and daddy your cussin, cuz 13 year-old's still get there asses busted~(heh)

(FiNiShEr)
Eyvons like a cow-wit 30 laxative-no hints, cuz'ery time this bitch talk's her mouth over flows w/ bullshit

Voted For: Wreckage

Wreckage: your lines are steched as fuck you shud have done rewording or make it smaller in lenth but you got ok but weak pucnhes and personals you need to work on struvture and flow
Eyvon: yours was just all basic and some werer iight but basicly your was kinda wack

Vote to Wreckage

please vote in one of my battles in the future......

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Cmon uppin for votes damn

Voted For: Wreckage

due to eyvon spittin only gang lyrics wrecage wins this battle.

wreckage:

you had better personals, and your punches were nice.
your structure is wack, you need to space out your bars man.
you had some decent vocab and some nice wordplay, your flow was aight it seemed a lil hard to read but the second time around made sense, so you get my vote

vote:wreckage

return the favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...02&page=3&pp=15

Voted For: Wreckage

structure was a little off in some spots but overall u ate this chick here the breakdown
open-wrek
metas-wrek
structure-wrek
multis-wrek
and finally closer-wrek
need I say more?

Umm one serious QUESTION


Isnt 3-0 a knockout or does it have 2 be stated cuz 3-0 is standard.

Voted For: Wreckage

Eyvons like a cow-wit 30 laxative-no hints,
cuz'ery time this bitch talk's her mouth over flows w/ bullshit
^^^write in bars and have them the same length
Dont come around here knowin'ya'whack, Let me nut on ya spine and label that as a "cum-back"~
^^ these two lines good wordplay and good punches. cum lines are gettin played, but your obviously better than this girl, she aint got any wordplay or wit she came way to basic.

hit up my dusty blunted battle....... and if u got 5 wins hit up my e-dubs battle....... links are in my sig

never mind the two battles in my sig neither of ya can vote on 'em so return wit a honest vote on this one http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143415

Umm I guess Its a KO or am I wrong!?

Well I need a mods answer lol.