DrasticMeasureZ vs upfront
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 5

Check in by: 08-23-04 at 11:32 PM

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DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 11:41 PM.

upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 12:53 PM.

im so0 sick wen i spit i should be sent to a docta/
ill take s0o many shots at ya head u b thinkin its socca/

s0o in order ta win u betta take drastic measurez/
cuz i come poppin off wit my fist i aint a big fan of beretas/

u aint no pimp nigga u relentless/
my dick deals wit mo mouths than a fuckin dentist/
ima b like donald trump and drop u like an apprentice/
i can keep on goin im sumthin like a run on sentence/

i gotta confident futa mus b cuz my cocky past/
ill put more holes in ya face than a hockey mask/
u should jus give up mayne u gunna make a fool ouuta yo ass/

im "ill wit punches" like "open wounds" on "knuckles of mental patients"//
your jaw will "drop so far off" like ur "blood cells" were never "related"//

ill inject "methylamine gas" into ur blood stream "putting u to sleep"//
the "oxygen" u breath will "devour your cells" leavin u "six feet deep"// (if they mix they will turn to fire)

my "rhymes" are "HIV positive" thats why theyre so "ill"//
theyll "distort" your "white blood cells" makin u have "graphic horrors to kill"// (HIV kills white blood cells)

ill "blast" u in your "head" givin ur "brain" a sound resemblin a "lisp"// (retarded)
u winnin dis battle is "luda" without the "cris"// (luda means crazy)

take ya "picture" up close so i can get a good "vision"//
grab it, swallow it whole, gag my self, then "spit an image"//

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

[b] a bit of a crap verse but its only the opening[\b]
im "ill wit punches" like "open wounds" on "knuckles of mental patients"//
your jaw will "drop so far off" like ur "blood cells" were never "related"//
[b] thats 1 was ok a bit of a good flow but still weak [\b]
ill inject "methylamine gas" into ur blood stream "putting u to sleep"//
the "oxygen" u breath will "devour your cells" leavin u "six feet deep"// (if they mix they will turn to fire)
[b]better verse better flow that was better dude[\b]
my "rhymes" are "HIV positive" thats why theyre so "ill"//
theyll "distort" your "white blood cells" makin u have "graphic horrors to kill"// (HIV kills white blood cells)
[b]much better got some good punches in there (best verse) [\b]
ill "blast" u in your "head" givin ur "brain" a sound resemblin a "lisp"// (retarded)
u winnin dis battle is "luda" without the "cris"// (luda means crazy)
[b]o come on bck to verse 1 crap weak man [\b]
take ya "picture" up close so i can get a good "vision"//
grab it, swallow it whole, gag my self, then "spit an image"//
my vote gose to drasticmeasurez just weak battle both of ya man come on that was crap
v/ drasticmeasurez

return the faout in my battle agaist blackmigik plz

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

DrasticMeasureZ took this one...i feel he had better flow, better personals, and better punches, his structure was good and he had good wordplay....upfront not bad good flow and shit but didn't come as hard as DrasticMeasureZ

v/DrasticMeasureZ

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

yo this was an aight battle...ima give u my vote cause it was just overall better to me...u were creative and hade punches as well as some good multies...it flowed as well as made sense...so my vote goes to drastic...gud one homie

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This was feedback posted for DrasticMeasureZ
 

drastic,Im not sure who U are completly but I have a damn good idea.Just by what name U called me.PM me back dogg I already sent U one.

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

breakdown
punhes=dm
meata=dm
multis=dm
flow=dm
begin=dm
end=dm
/v/= dm now plz return tha favor with an honest vote on ma battle againest big bonks

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Drastic wins this battle barely only bcuz of vocab. The strucutre was pretty stretched and all those explanations within the spit really fucks of the flow of ya rhymes and the connnections were kind of stretched put ur explanations at the end if u have to but u had some good punches worked in there tho. simplify some of ur punches so there easier to read or chop them down or somethin n u'll b str8
upfront had a good spit too but while drastic was too complicated up front was too simple his structure was good and punches were ok but vocab was pretty simple so just up on that
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