Midnight Shift
 

Yo heres my first open mic and i would like some honest feedback.. its a collab wit me my bro and my unks gurl
ill put tha rest in some otha time this is my first verse and my unks gurlz(nina) verse tell me wat u think


(ME)
Now spread tha word
I got them bricks on dem dead end streetz
And watch them jump out boyz
Cuz they rollin 10 deep// creep crawlin tha night
Yall no tha deal// on tha muffuckin hill
We all strapped to kill
Chill hittin licks in tha mud
It never ceases
Mad cuz they askin me for 3 dollar pieces
How tha fuck im sposed to come up
Off a shife move/ run up on a twenty and get ur ass an ice cube
It aint nuttin y u bumpin in ur cutlass
Just understand tha ruffness
Never cut for da gutless
Cause its do or die// u ask who am I
An A-town heartbreaker ever since jr high
Eye of tha public
Tha black be a suspect
So tha streetz taught me to be loveless
Causin ruckus in a dope feind bucket
My 2 favorite subjects duck its and fuck its

Chorus:(ME)
Tha night shift// young hustlas workin grave yards
My nine be// beside me// tonite we// work tha nite shift

(NINA)
Its yo midnight mistress//playa name pimptress
I keep it krunk handle up my business
Queen of tha dick// fiend for my shit
Im sumthin korrupt
16 in my clip bout to blow up
Puff black and milds
U cant cramp my style
Playa hatin bitches make me crack a smile
Tonite we worldwide// my nina nigga sounds like tha fourth of july
,uthafuckas die
Daddy streetz wanna marry ya// then bury ya
Nina Ross Mary jane Ms. Cocaine, the 3 devils daughters deep in tha dope game
Tru G’s don’t change// close range left ya boy wit no brainz
Street zombies// takin out possies
Dangerous hobbies just stop me

Chorus:(NINA)
Tha night shift// young hustlas workin grave yards
My nine be// beside me// tonite we// work tha nite shift

its aight keep going at it, nice flow and word play.

thanx letme get mo feedbak

Um ya new so it's expected of ya not to have much knoledge of the text game but keep at it and u'll elevate keep it up

man thanx but wat u mean text dogg i freestyle i usually dont rite but uppin gimme some feedback