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Ms. Get Gully 08-21-04 10:49 AM

Damn a Def Poet..Damn a Deaf Poet..
 
fuck structure u all should know im not one for it.

When i Say Deaf Poet you might think wow
Def Poet on the Stage with an audience around
but i speak of a deaf poet who's actions feed off truth
the Passion of poetry is felt even though they not hearin u
when the sonnets spoken the difference is chosen
vision is broken, a vivid detail of spirit hype is unfocused
one flick of the finger n lift of his hand, thats when u realize he thinks livin is hopeless
u can put on a serious face and pose as a fan
hopin that he not notice you dont understand
but as this deaf poets hand moves and lingers thru this poetry affair
you start to realize even with out a voice the depth is still there
amazingly a beats playing as fingers move rapidly with rhythm
u quickly assume damn..this nigga been practicing for this one
paper given to you with the poem printed apon for viewers to read along
lettin the beat pop n thump as the words spill from ya impressed crani-um
i respect Def Poets,
But i give more props to a Deaf Poet Who understands the Hope
from Body Language n jestures of finger motions the most
Sound is absent,so you feel pain in the shit he wrote in this verse
but its more power felt when he puts his fist to his shirt
to let this audience know that this deaf poetry shit really hurts
so Damn..its true..Actions speak louder than words?
Damn a def poet...Damn... a Deaf Poet.

Ill-Grammatix 08-23-04 05:32 PM

WHOA!!!!

there's no reason that this shyt should get slept on... this shyt was on point in every way... the imagery, the passion, the truth of it all! Yo, I always thought you were good but i didn't realize how good you actually were... I don't usually visit the Poetic Scriptures but yo... if I keep reading shyt like this I just might become a fan of this shyt! Keep them drops comin' ma!

Ill-Grammatix 08-23-04 05:33 PM

What part of FL you rep? I got fam down in Orlando

Ms. Get Gully 08-25-04 09:57 AM

o true im about a hour away from Orlando..im in st petersburg FL. right by tampa

fluidmoon 08-25-04 10:19 PM

WOW, nice drop, powerfull in every way gurl, put this shit in open mic as well, so everyone can read this shit, very raw and uninhibited, beautifully written, keep it up!!!!!!!!!1

Rhyme Machine 08-26-04 12:17 PM

wow this shit is nice!


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