DrasticMeasureZ vs Soulja4life187
 

Battle Rules:

5 BARZ
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 15

Check in by: 08-24-04 at 09:59 PM

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DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 10:00 PM.

Soulja4life187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 10:02 PM.

yo nigga i said my niggaz dont dance they keep tha gun in they pants and blow the block away, now fall back,fall back,fall back,fall back

Yo nigga u want a true story well here is some shit to chew on/while im at it heres a dick for ur bitch to screw on/just move on, cuz this shit cuz this shit right here....its over/ill cook ur ass as if ur name was russel stover/i told ya that im not to be fucked with/bitch u can suck dick/when u seem me duck quick/cuz my AK spit fire at the same time/light ur ass like im bout to do to ur lame rhyme, its game time/im done wit ur ass cuz this is wastin my time/ill chug this nigga like he was a lemon lime.

this "philosophical" delinquent doesnt speak wit his "mind" and "thoughts"//
Ill "mentally" kill u and I wont be charged wit "battery and assault"//

those who think they can "see me" its an "optical illusion"//
ill "stab" u so many times youll be at the "hospital" awatin a "blood transfusion"//

ill "rip out your lungs" while my flows leave you "breathless"//
dont worry bout "sleepin at night" my 9 mill is "reckless" and would leave ya "restless"// (dead)

ill "rip off ur ears" and put it on my "brain" so u can "hear what im thinkin"//
your "rhymes" arent that "dense" thats why yours "flows" are "sinkin"//

the "hot saliva" that "exerts from my mouth" leave u "hydrothermal and burned"//
me "endin your life" is like "gettin took to court"... this "battle is adjourned"//

Upppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppin for votes man this is a slept on battle i hate that shit

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

You win this because you had actuall punches...although some were wack, they were atleast punches...You had an ok flow, shaky in places...but ok for the most part...The slashes at the end its ugly...and quotin multis and shit is gay...and jus quotin shit is even gayer....some werent even punches, jus quoted...

other guy had a wack verse...no good lines...no punches, jus lines and lines about he did this, he did that...wasnt feelin it...strutcture was bad...look at other battles to see wut structure you should use.

Uppin In Dis Motha Fucker

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

dis one goes to drasticmeasurez better punches and you he had a better flow

This was feedback posted for DrasticMeasureZ
 

y u qoutin every word lmaoo

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

damn...harder punches, better flow, and just...damn homie you took this shit...
v/ drasticmeasurez

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